Michael J. Falotico Poet Couplet

A Voyage Into You

A voyage of you that starts with a kiss...
A ride taken slow without a spot missed...
Silky curves that have a life of its own...
Rivers of fruit that leads to your home...
Strawberry rainbows that encircle your body...
We drift into bliss as you surrender to me...
Hands that learn to speak on this tasty ride...
Where we lay on a stage where passion can't hide...

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Daniela Angeja September 18, 2012 at 10:39 AM Is there anything left to say? Very good!

Debbie Duncan August 9, 2012 at 11:44 PM Awesome ,,,,, ;}

Joseph May July 26, 2012 at 9:17 PM very nice write...enjoyed...thanks for stopping by...Joseph

Wilma Neels July 22, 2012 at 6:22 AM A sensual, romantic and bliss filled voyage ;) all smiles after reading this, quite sure you got Rosanna smiling too with this gem.. Hope your Sunday will be a fab one ;) love & hugs CTH

Poet Destroyer A July 22, 2012 at 2:59 AM Hello...Michael... wow~~wow~~ wow~~~ this poem has to much exotic flavor.. you breached over the sensitive passion side on the soup. love your poem...PD

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 21, 2012 at 9:05 PM where can I buy tickets for this passionate ride luv? so intense with deep emotion of the loving kind .. immersed in lines of hypnotic pleasure to find the treasure .. wow.. JG must print this one out and put in my special book of intimate pages luv.. talk soon promise.. will text after all my tests next week.. xoxo forever

Anne-Lise Andresen July 21, 2012 at 1:42 PM Sooo sweet and romantic written Michael, life is spiced up with passion and love.....Love it.... - Have a beautiful weekend. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Nette Onclaud July 21, 2012 at 1:39 PM a voyage sensuous with love in tow, michael... melodious sense of rhythm and rhyme, sweet as strawberry bits... good to see your posting again... winning huggs!..:)

Russell Sivey July 21, 2012 at 1:18 PM This is quite the romantic piece my friend! I love the imagery you have portrayed here! Keep writting these illustrious poems Michael! I look forward to reading them! Awesome write, Great Work!!

David Williams July 21, 2012 at 9:26 AM Michael, nice little journey this, have a cool weekend my friend..David