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A Vow a Ring a Holy Thing

A Vow, a Ring, a Holy thing
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                                         I was barely eighteen, 

                                       And you stood at my side

                                        More than a friend now,

                                          For, I was your bride

                                    In every pew within the church

                                        Our Family and friends

                                     Witness to our young vows, 

                                       Of promise till lives end
  
                                  The children came along and oh, 

                                     Those precious little tikes!

                                    Our yard was filled with joys

                                    N' toys n' little kiddie bikes

                                We grew older, and they grew up, 

                                  We sipped the many blessings

                                  Of the Lord Who filled our cup
 
                              The years, they flew past me & you
 
                              Through sunny days, or stormy haze

                              And now our hair is mixed with greys   

                                 The terror of your heart attack, 

                              We're praising God, you're left intact

                               To live some more on earthen shore

                                Treasuring life, more than before

                               Our vows, our rings, each Holy thing

                              Through joys or sorrow, honey; sting

                             And though the days on earth grow dim    

                               Our hearts deep hope, ever on Him

                              You're at my side, I'm still your bride

                                We'll watch life's ever-flowing tide

                               The ebb, the flow, this earthen glow

                                Sunset begins; climb sure, yet slow

                                  Beholding life, as Husband, wife

                                 Praying our God ease every strife

                                  I thank Him for His gift, so true;

                                 Praising our God, for keeping you

                              Here near my side, and pray our song

                                Is healthy, joy-filled, life lived long

                             Vows we uttered with our young breath

                                  To love and cherish, unto death  

                                  I pray it's long before that sting  

                                  And unto life and hope I'll cling
 
                                   Wearing on my hand your ring

                                   A circle like life. A Holy thing

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Date: 5/29/2025 12:47:00 PM
this is wonderful poetry. So emotive and pretty.
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Date: 3/20/2023 8:20:00 PM
This poem has so much love, like this marriage does. The kind of love a husband and wife need to have. Very well written. I agree with every word. Going into my FAVE for sure.
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Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 3/20/2023 9:32:00 PM
Yes Anon, so much love, and I am so very grateful for this love, this marriage, and my beloved husband whom I love beyond measure. Your words are a huge blessing to me, and I am incredible honored by your fave! :) Have a blessed evening, and may the new week ahead be filled with peace, and blessings for you and y our family :)
Date: 3/12/2023 11:04:00 PM
So lovely BJ. I just admire the way you have expressed and expounded your life as man and wife and your resolve to stay true to the marriage vows till the end of life. To my FAVE.
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Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 3/14/2023 1:34:00 AM
Thank you Valsa, your fave is a wonderful honor to me! You are such a blessing to me :) Hugs to you my sweet friend!
Date: 3/12/2023 7:11:00 PM
Beautifully expressed, BJ. ... Btw: Democrats are looking to ban teenage marriages. There's no end to their impositions on us decent folk. A pox on all of them. Here's to you and your husband. Cheers! :) gw
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Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 3/14/2023 1:33:00 AM
Thank you Gershon. I had no idea they were doing that. I am so glad to have had so many blessed years with my husband. My mother-in-law and father-in-law married even younger than my husband and I. They loved each other so very much. When she died, he soon followed only six weeks later, he loved her so much. I'll have to read up about that. Maybe they mean for really young teens, I guess they couldn't stop an eighteen-year-old, I hope not? We had a wonderful couple ministering at our church, married since 15 and 16, and still married 45 years later. My sister eloped to Mexico to marry her sweetheart, back in the 60's :) Nothing would stop them!
Date: 3/12/2023 11:05:00 AM
Beautiful sentiments of marriage vows through ups and downs! Loved it BJ!
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Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 3/14/2023 1:29:00 AM
Thank you Kim :) I really appreciate you visit and comment :) I remember your coming to Arizona in March, I hope your visit is awesome <3
Date: 3/12/2023 10:25:00 AM
Wonderful poem, and yes, it is a holy thing. John
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Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 3/14/2023 1:27:00 AM
Thank you John, it truly is. Thank you for your visit and kind words :)
Date: 3/12/2023 6:19:00 AM
Your poetry exudes love and commitment in every word. Reading it was a very absolute delight. I am grateful to you, BJ
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Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 3/14/2023 1:26:00 AM
Thank you Sotto :) I really appreciate your comment, it truly blesses my heart. God bless you :)
Date: 3/11/2023 11:09:00 PM
I too married at 18 and we are still by each others side. Your poem resonates love and dedication. It was a pleasure to read. Thank you
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Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 3/14/2023 1:25:00 AM
Wendy, that is so wonderful <3 :) I came over to your site, I absolutely loved your poem about marriage, it made me smile. Your visit and comment are encouraging to me :)

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