A Voice

If it had been a good life, I would have closed my eyes
But the conscious mind is trembling with  a sorrowful voice.

A caring sound and a loyal heart, what else does the soul perceive?
Are they not enough to drown my sorrowful voice?

If I turn my back they bring their daggers.
When I turn to them, their charm kills my sorrowful voice.

When today I am gone, how long will the drama last?
How long will they speak in the same sorrowful voice?

If you knew how to lead your life 'Mumtaz',
They would have cared a little for your sorrowful voice.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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February 23, 2018 at 8:24 PM
My dear friend Mumtaz , the first half of the first couplet needs a rhyming end, otherwise is beautiful. I have a Masnavi called " the voice"...
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