A Visit From Santa Claus - Part 1

It was Christmas Eve, not a soul made a sound,
And not so much as a mouse could be found,
The children had hung their stockings on the hearth,
As a quiet, peacefulness gently fell upon the Earth,
My family were all asleep, their heads full of dream,
Of Santa's arrival with his eight reindeer team,

Father in his nightcap, slept soundly in bed,
And Mother in her nightgown of green and red,
When all of a sudden I heard a commotion,
And jumped out of bed with a curious notion,
I ran to the window and pulled open the curtain,
I thought it must be Santa Claus for certain,

New fallen snow shone bright below the moon,
Giving the illusion of daylight in mid afternoon,
I looked out my open window despite the cold,
When a sight met my eyes, wonderous to behold,
A lively, old gentleman aboard a great sleigh,
With eight tiny reindeer leading the way,

As quick as a bolt of lightning out of the sky,
He called to each one as they rocketed by,
"Now, Donner! Now, Vixen! Now, Dasher and Dancer!,
On, Cupid! On, Blitzen! On, Comet and Prancer!,
Leap up to the wall and onto the rooftop,
Dash away all and let us make our first stop!",

They flew through the air with much ease,
Like dry autumn leaves on a sudden breeze,
The reindeer landed so smooth and swift,
Along with Santa and a sleigh full of gifts,
I heard their hoofs pawing upon the shingle,
And joyful laughter from that old Kris Kringle,




To be continued in Part 2....
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Mirzoev Avatar
January 6, 2014 at 3:33 AM
Great work, well done - Alisher
Mcdaid Avatar
December 24, 2013 at 2:18 PM
to you and your family have a beautiful love filled christmas and a joyful new year
Deschler Avatar
December 27, 2013 at 10:08 PM
Thank you very much, Liam! I hope that you and your family had a great Christmas, and I wish you all the best for the New Year!
Lamoureux Avatar
December 23, 2013 at 8:21 AM
On to part two.
Duncan Avatar
December 22, 2013 at 5:53 PM
Merry Christ mass to you Kelly :) on to part two
Deschler Avatar
December 26, 2013 at 6:34 PM
Thank you, Debbie. I hope you had a great Christmas, and I wish you all the best for the New Year!
Guzzi Avatar
December 20, 2013 at 7:35 PM
Happy holidays. Light & Love
Deschler Avatar
December 23, 2013 at 11:55 PM
Debbie, I hope that you and your family have a very Merry Christmas!
Melugin Avatar
December 20, 2013 at 8:25 AM
HO HO HO! This is so true and I can't wait to read part 2....Kelly??? Did you mention my belly? Awesome write. chuck
Deschler Avatar
December 22, 2013 at 7:56 PM
LOL!...Yes, I did! Thank you very much, Chuck!
Dunn Avatar
December 16, 2013 at 7:06 PM
A wonderious discription of the hoilday experience I can't wait to see how it ends or does it. cheri
Dietrich Avatar
December 16, 2013 at 2:54 PM
looks like you adapted the words a bit to make your own rendition. Let me see how you did part two.
Deschler Avatar
December 19, 2013 at 3:53 PM
I thought it would be fun to write a different version of "The Night Before Christmas". I kept the story the same, but I retold it in another way.
Mcdaid Avatar
December 16, 2013 at 9:47 AM
amazingly beautifully penned kelly a delightful read
Deschler Avatar
December 18, 2013 at 9:44 PM
Thank you so much, Liam! I am happy that you enjoyed my poem!
Tacito Avatar
December 16, 2013 at 7:20 AM
Awesome! I was grinning like a schoolboy!!! So much simple joy embedded in this little story you told..loved it!
Deschler Avatar
December 18, 2013 at 8:07 PM
Thank you so much, Drake! That means a lot coming from you. I am so happy that you enjoyed it!
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