A Visit

I went and saw my Dad today
I felt I had a lot to say
I love to stop and visit there
Such love and kindness in the air

We talked about the children and
I mentioned how they've grown
I spoke about my Mother and
how she hates to be alone

I cried and said "Oh Dad I'm scared"
For I'm alone now to
Oh little one don't be afraid
I'll always be with you

I felt his warmth come over me
at last my heart was still
He took away all sense of doubt
and took away the chill

As in his life he settled me
He always had that knack
If I could have one wish today
I'd bring my Father back...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 1/20/2011 4:37:00 PM
oh, this is wonderful, sharon when I realized what the visit was. Good one, dear. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 11/21/2010 10:28:00 AM
I always think of my father Sharon, and I miss him also. Thank you for sharing this gem >> James :)
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Date: 11/19/2010 2:28:00 PM
To a daughter a dad is more comforting and inspiring as she is the apple of his eyes, Sharon.
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Date: 11/19/2010 10:47:00 AM
You know form my "A Dark Day In Summer" I feel the same way.... beautiful write..love Michael
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Date: 11/19/2010 10:28:00 AM
a wonderful tribute to a wonderful dad. this is a wonderful piece dedicated to a man after your heart. keep your pen dancing to the drum beat of your heart. you are such a great talent. keep writing! love, Always, Adeleke
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Date: 11/18/2010 3:25:00 PM
I sure would bring my Daddy back too Sharon ..he was wonderful guy ..sounds like u had a great relationship with your own Father.. awesome piece.. a pure treasure and tribute piece luv.. touched my heart deeply..luv..
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