- a Vision Through Snow Crystals -

A snowflake always spells unique in words 
Frozen songs from heaven 
Melting into the heart 

Stunning winter kisses warm
My passion is deep,rooted
flowing through the heart

Rolling out a carpet of divine purity 
What better way to rest easy 
Soft white footprints remain

In the snow you’ve made
Where an angel dances
In a vision of beauty

Warmly upon the breath
Floating on the wave of love
Silver dancing ice breaks 

This soul can now reach Heaven
I melt into your snowflake 
A winter rose is born

Blown forever silken sparkles kiss
Into one beauty of a starlight vision
On me so deeply inside purity and happiness blooms 





26.12.2015
(unrhymed tercets) 
A Collaborated write by
Anne-Lise Andresen, and Liam Mc Daid
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Haikutwinkle Avatar
February 7, 2016 at 8:28 PM
Love the imagery painted in this writing
Andresen Avatar
February 7, 2016 at 5:16 AM
- One of our beautiful pearls, dear friend - I wish you a blessed weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Trifiatis Avatar
February 7, 2016 at 4:17 AM
You are the F. Astaire and G. Rogers of poetic collaborations! A seven to each!
Petersen Potter Avatar
February 6, 2016 at 8:29 PM
Hi Liam n' Lise!This is a very beautiful,romantic, passionate,dreamy,captivating and heartfelt love poem you've written here my dearest friends.Just dazzling!So very beautifully written!I just love it.A true glowing golden gem!Another very beautiful dreamy sweet romantic passionate heartfelt love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.So very beautiful,romantic n' sweet.Very enchanting!Just wonderful!I truly enjoy it!Excellent imagery!Just superb!Outstanding collaboration! Your pens are truly mighty golden!A 7 + ++ to each!Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light! God bless you always!:)Love n hugs!xoxox D.^O^
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 6, 2016 at 6:48 PM
How beautiful and romantic this is from both your creative pens! I was enchanted! #7
Allison Avatar
February 6, 2016 at 6:21 PM
Absolutely breathtaking imagery Anne Lise and Liam:-) hugs Jan xx7
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