Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Terza Rima

- A Vision Through Snow Crystals -

A snowflake always spells unique in words 
Frozen songs from heaven 
Melting into the heart 

Stunning winter kisses warm
My passion is deep,rooted
flowing through the heart

Rolling out a carpet of divine purity 
What better way to rest easy 
Soft white footprints remain

In the snow you’ve made
Where an angel dances
In a vision of beauty

Warmly upon the breath
Floating on the wave of love
Silver dancing ice breaks 

This soul can now reach Heaven
I melt into your snowflake 
A winter rose is born

Blown forever silken sparkles kiss
Into one beauty of a starlight vision
On me so deeply inside purity and happiness blooms 





26.12.2015
(unrhymed tercets) 
A Collaborated write by
Anne-Lise Andresen, and Liam Mc Daid

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Angeline Haikutwinkle January 25, 2017 at 10:56 AM Given a 7, complimenting the structure, coupled with enchanting imagery, I see the magical inspiration from Liam in this one.

Phyllis Babcock January 1, 2016 at 5:39 PM Another lovely collaboration by you two. Enjoyed the read and you both do such a awesome job in writing your poems. love phyl Anne-Lise Andresen January 2, 2016 at 6:18 AM - Thank you, dear Phyllis :) - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Len Gasun December 31, 2015 at 3:41 AM This is another beautiful poem from you my dear friend, Anne Lise. So enjoyed! May I also have this chance to thank you for all the love, support, encouragement that you've extended to me and everything for this year 2015! May the coming year 2016 be the best, most wonderful and blessed year for you and your family! Happy happy New Year! love lots and biggest hug, Leonora Anne-Lise Andresen December 31, 2015 at 9:00 AM - Thank you, dear friend Leonora :) - I wish you and your loved ones a happy new year! - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid December 30, 2015 at 7:24 AM sorry for the delay commenting dear friend anne lise finding christmas has large demands on the heart truly a great pleasure sharing pens with you wishing you ringing in the new year lots of happy smiles Anne-Lise Andresen December 30, 2015 at 7:43 AM .......better late .....than never, dear Liam :) - Happy New Year ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Debbie Duncan December 28, 2015 at 5:17 PM Well this is a very nice write . Hope you had a nice Christmas my long distance friend :) H ave a blessed Happy New Year XXXXX Anne-Lise Andresen December 29, 2015 at 2:46 AM - Dear friend Debbie, a pleasure that you enjoy our poem : - A Vision Through Snow Crystals - Happy New Year ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick December 28, 2015 at 5:13 PM Enjoyed reading your collaborative work..Reads like a winner if written for a contest...Way to go..Thank you for stopping by..Camellia(Rose Of Winter) is a shrub/tree that we have here in USA..I enjoy seeing the blossoms during the winter months..Sometimes the cold gets them and sometimes too much rain gets the blossoms but they do add a touch of color to the landscape when it is usually bleak..Sara Sara Kendrick December 29, 2015 at 5:19 AM Okay...Sara Anne-Lise Andresen December 29, 2015 at 2:44 AM - We never write for contest, dear Sara ..... we write for each other and anyone who wants to read our co write - Thank you for your comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus December 28, 2015 at 3:56 PM A beautiful poem with a complimentary title! One can tell that you two do truly write for the love of writing! Keep up the good work...mix ink:) ~ Regards // paul Anne-Lise Andresen December 29, 2015 at 2:45 AM - I am grateful that you enjoy our writing, Paul :) - Many thanks for visit and comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath December 28, 2015 at 9:04 AM i feel beauty hides in beauty my lovely lovely friends. Both are genius, i know well. Well done and wish you good luck if for contest. A clean 7 i think. Loved always,bl Anne-Lise Andresen December 28, 2015 at 11:35 AM - We never write for contest ..... we write for each other and anyone who wants to read our co write - I am grateful that you enjoy our writing dear friend Bl :) - Many thanks for comments and one 7 - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis December 28, 2015 at 5:31 AM Certain it is an angel is whispering in your ears those heavenly sentences and an other is holding your pen for such a poetic achievement of you two: Anne-Lise and Liam! Congratulations and thank you for the beauty offered! A seven to each! Anne-Lise Andresen December 28, 2015 at 11:41 AM - How could you know ....... :) ..... - There is an angel, my friend Demetrios - Always beautiful words from you, many thanks for comments and a 7 - hugs //Anne-Lise :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser December 28, 2015 at 12:52 AM Anne Lise and Liam, great poets bound together to weave delicate lovely poems.. hats off to you!!!~Olive Eloisa hugs@!!! Anne-Lise Andresen December 28, 2015 at 3:30 AM - A pleasure that you enjoy our poem : - A Vision Through Snow Crystals -, Olive :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Robyn Campbell December 27, 2015 at 1:44 PM This took my breath away. You are a fabulous poet along with your collaborator. The line "Blown forever silken sparkles kiss" is a most perfect line of poetry. Gorgeous! Anne-Lise Andresen December 28, 2015 at 3:28 AM - Robyn, thank you for lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud December 27, 2015 at 1:09 PM belated congrats on the POTD, anne and liam... huggs on this peaceful sunday! Anne-Lise Andresen December 27, 2015 at 1:17 PM - Do you mean our p.o.t.d. : Dec 7, 2015 - Between Two Heartbeat - ???? - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Hansteven Selfa December 27, 2015 at 8:07 AM Beautiful collaboration. :) Anne-Lise Andresen December 28, 2015 at 3:28 AM - Hansteven, thank you for lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Dalia Shahein December 27, 2015 at 6:56 AM Such a lovely breath taking poem , I really enjoyed reading it...Merry Christmas and happy new year...hugs / / :) dalia Anne-Lise Andresen December 28, 2015 at 3:27 AM - Dalia, a pleasure that you enjoy our poem : - A Vision Through Snow Crystals - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Bateman December 26, 2015 at 8:00 PM Dear Anne-Lise and Liam: Passionate, soulful, with a touch of the divine and the warmth of love and beauty through the vision and wonder of a snowflake. A brilliantly rendered Tercet here!! TR/FAV for sure!! Happy New Year and Best Wishes Always, Gary Anne-Lise Andresen December 27, 2015 at 6:08 AM - Dear Gary, thank you for taking time to read our poem (I know you have much to do) - Special thanks for TR/FAV :) - I wish you and Ingrid a peaceful new year 2016 ! - hugs & love // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison December 26, 2015 at 5:46 PM absolutely breathtaking Anne Lise and Liam:-) hugs Jan xx Anne-Lise Andresen December 27, 2015 at 5:51 AM - Jan,thank you for lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud December 26, 2015 at 2:28 PM radiant like you, dear anne.. so beautifully expressed... happy holydays to you and the family..huggs Anne-Lise Andresen December 26, 2015 at 2:35 PM - Merry Christmas and thank you kindly, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Dorian Petersen Potter December 26, 2015 at 12:41 PM Hi Anne Lise n' Liam!This is a very beautiful,romantic, passionate,dreamy,captivating and heartfelt love poem you've written here my dearest friends.Just dazzling!So very beautifully written!I just love it.A true golden gem!Another very beautiful dreamy sweet romantic passionate heartfelt love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.So very beautiful,romantic n' sweet.Very enchanting!Just wonderful!I truly enjoy it!Excellent imagery!Just superb!Outstanding collaboration! Your pens are truly mighty golden!A 7 + ++ to each!Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light! God bless you always!:)Love n hugs!xoxox D.^O^ Anne-Lise Andresen December 26, 2015 at 1:16 PM - Dorian, thank you for lovely comments a 7 +++ and visit :) - Enjoy the rest of Christmas :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)