A Vision Rimas Dissolutas

She drifts on a fragile boat 
trying to drown all of her thoughts; 
Wishing only to keep sailing 
along the peace inside her mind;

No need for a long goodbye note 
it disintegrates at five knots; 
Weighed down by heavy tears sinking, 
nothing within is left behind;

Crashing through clouds developing 
a vision left in waves to find.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Fowler Avatar
November 7, 2022 at 8:59 AM
Super metaphorical write Melanni.
Kyser Avatar
November 2, 2022 at 5:04 AM
Very nicely penned. A lot of imagery captured in a very short space, and the sailing on a fragile boat theme works very well here.
Udaeta Avatar
November 2, 2022 at 6:25 AM
Thank you.
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