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A Vision Rimas Dissolutas

She drifts on a fragile boat trying to drown all of her thoughts; Wishing only to keep sailing along the peace inside her mind; No need for a long goodbye note it disintegrates at five knots; Weighed down by heavy tears sinking, nothing within is left behind; Crashing through clouds developing a vision left in waves to find.

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Date: 11/7/2022 8:59:00 AM
Super metaphorical write Melanni.
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Date: 11/2/2022 5:04:00 AM
Very nicely penned. A lot of imagery captured in a very short space, and the sailing on a fragile boat theme works very well here.
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Melani Udaeta
Date: 11/2/2022 6:25:00 AM
Thank you.

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