A Vision of Existence - Baby Style

"A Vision of Existence - Baby Style" my eyes blink within a cushioned comfort zone fingers and toes cling to tender warm insides I tend to dream of bicycles when I birth flesh and bone or a pink doll house where a loving family abides. my swimming skills are limited as I lay in Mommy's womb one day I'll jump the high dive at the beach in a few months I'll push my way out of this vacuumed tomb to taste sweet fruits; my favorite will be peach. I dream of running round a baseball field on a sunny day or jumping rope or riding skates with friends sometimes, I wonder, how Mommy will hold me in her special way how Daddy will teach me great things where learning never ends. I know I'll have a nursery room with toys and books and games in the corner an awesome truck with cool fender am sure my parents are hard at work browsing baby names but I will have the last surprise revealing to them, my gender. *For Unborn Baby Dream by The Scribe
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A  Avatar
March 13, 2014 at 2:51 AM
beautiful poem.... SKAT
Gasun Avatar
October 18, 2012 at 12:26 AM
A big hearty congratulations on your awesome win my dear friend, Linda-Marie! This is really great and I love it! love and hugs:)LG
Brown Avatar
October 16, 2012 at 12:37 PM
Congratulations on your win in the "Unborn Babies Dream" contest Linda-Marie. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
October 15, 2012 at 12:02 PM
Many congrats Linda-Marie on winning the contest, "Unborn babies dream" by Linton. Best wishes - Hitendra Mehta
Guzzi Avatar
October 15, 2012 at 11:14 AM
Congrad's on your winning write. Light & Love
Liwayway Avatar
October 14, 2012 at 8:54 PM
Congratulations on your win friend Linda-Marie. Lovely write!! Hugs! **Maria**
Ramage Avatar
October 14, 2012 at 7:50 PM
Nicely done. congratulations on your win. lee
A   Avatar
October 14, 2012 at 7:33 PM
HELLO, LINDA MY BFF, congratulations with your deep and wonderful win in THE SCRIBE'S "Unborn Babies Dream" contest. Have yourself a good night~ PD
May Avatar
October 14, 2012 at 5:52 PM
congrats on your win with this wonderful write Linda
Sweetheart Avatar
October 14, 2012 at 3:52 PM
WON 2ND PLACE .. THANKXXX
Rabary-Andriamanday Avatar
October 1, 2012 at 3:49 AM
Another title-poem! It inspires me for today's posting - if I am patient enough. Anyway, I already had my dream journey into the past, reading your great work: I used to call may daughter "La peach", when she was a new born baby. Souvenirs..Thank you! Love, Hanitra
Devnath  Avatar
September 30, 2012 at 1:46 AM
Sweet imagination of baby style wonderfully done. Enjoyed a lot. Loved always, bl
Horne Avatar
September 29, 2012 at 12:42 PM
LOL, had a chuckle at the last line - little Eric sure did that. Love this sweet write, Linda-Marie
Bauer Avatar
September 28, 2012 at 4:09 PM
this is just charming! good luck in the contest - this sounds like a winner to me!
Dietrich Avatar
September 28, 2012 at 2:14 PM
What a lovely poem for Scribe. Sure to be a hit, my friend. Joe is walking in here at any moment from being gone to SLC. I am scrambling. hahaha. Luv, Andrea
Sivey Avatar
September 28, 2012 at 6:40 AM
Oh wow, I love this very special write my friend! I especially liked the part where you brought up the surprise they will have when the baby reveals his/her gender! This is a wonderful dream to have as a baby...I wonder if I dreamed anything like this, probably not, I probably just dreamed of food or something like that! I really enjoyed this fully delightful poem, I love it! Fantastic piece, Great Work!!
Mannan Avatar
September 27, 2012 at 10:48 PM
Such a beauty Linda. This makes me want to be a baby again.
Sweetheart Avatar
September 27, 2012 at 10:00 PM
WITH OUR NEW LITTLE BABY IN HOME NOW LOOKING AT HIS FACE TRYING TO IMAGINE HIS DREAMS .. THOUGH HE WAS TO BE A GIRL WE R SO HAPPY FOR THIS BOY ,, SO I WROTE THE POEM WITH TWO GENDERS IN MIND .. ENJOY WITH LUV ..
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