A Vision

Recently I had a vision
The creator came 
Inserted a small incision 
In the heart of every being
Across every expansive  land
To all creatures known as man 
He poured enduring love
Suddenly every transgression 
encased itself in a bubble
filled with noxious air
Gently floated towards heaven
Releasing man's despair
LOVE multiplied by seventy seven
No more guilt laden quicksand
Each precious heart did expand 
It became the day earth shifted
When all the sins were lifted
Human beings realized 
He gave his body 
With acceptance
All were gifted

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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May Avatar
February 25, 2017 at 9:01 AM
Beautiful write Donna...The greatest gift of all..
Roberts Avatar
February 25, 2017 at 9:49 AM
Thank You Joseph
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February 24, 2017 at 11:12 AM
A beautiful vision! Bless :)
Roberts Avatar
February 24, 2017 at 11:41 AM
Thanks Maureen
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