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A Vision

Recently I had a vision The creator came Inserted a small incision In the heart of every being Across every expansive land To all creatures known as man He poured enduring love Suddenly every transgression encased itself in a bubble filled with noxious air Gently floated towards heaven Releasing man's despair LOVE multiplied by seventy seven No more guilt laden quicksand Each precious heart did expand It became the day earth shifted When all the sins were lifted Human beings realized He gave his body With acceptance All were gifted word count 92

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Date: 2/25/2017 9:01:00 AM
Beautiful write Donna...The greatest gift of all..
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Donna Roberts
Date: 2/25/2017 9:49:00 AM
Thank You Joseph
Date: 2/24/2017 11:12:00 AM
A beautiful vision! Bless :)
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Donna Roberts
Date: 2/24/2017 11:41:00 AM
Thanks Maureen

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