A Vision

Angel of my dream
You came to me in my sleep
The realm where I hide my weep
Afraid, not a scream
You said my name I can't keep
I been blessed, jeremiah
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Chircop Avatar
May 13, 2009 at 7:28 AM
whatever your name---your message is the same--godd and loving and a poet--for sure;-)---charma
Bird Avatar
May 12, 2009 at 9:57 PM
Glorious piece Jeremiah. I always enjoy the heart you put into your work!
Shahwan Avatar
May 12, 2009 at 12:26 PM
Beautiful spice among your poems.
Christian Avatar
May 12, 2009 at 2:59 AM
Amen my friend and a great blesing indeed, God bless you from diane
Moreno Avatar
May 11, 2009 at 9:59 PM
I've had a simular vision, nice choka...Raul
Hudson Avatar
May 11, 2009 at 7:48 PM
I am so glad for you, Isn't it wonderful? I accepted him into my life when I was thirteen.-AA
Hudson Avatar
May 11, 2009 at 7:28 PM
why couldn't you keep your name?-AA
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