A Violent Sneeze

The best thing in life is a really good sneeze Explodes with such ferocity, it brings down trees Actually thrills me no end Torn undies it does rend Makes a hurricane seem like a gentle wee breeze
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Cunningham Avatar
October 24, 2020 at 9:54 AM
Clench cheeks, you don't want to have an accident lol
Ellison Avatar
October 24, 2020 at 10:57 AM
LOL Clenched cheeks are imperative or... well... you know!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
October 24, 2020 at 7:05 AM
I think the sneeze fixed my tongue! ;),
Ellison Avatar
October 24, 2020 at 8:12 AM
The feeling of joy is indescribable! Makes me want to sneeze RIGHT NOW!!! XOX
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace