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A Violent Sneeze

The best thing in life is a really good sneeze Explodes with such ferocity, it brings down trees Actually thrills me no end Torn undies it does rend Makes a hurricane seem like a gentle wee breeze

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 6/11/2018 6:21:00 AM
Lol! I had a sneeze blow a rib out a few weeks ago, I can attest! ;) xomo!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 6/11/2018 6:37:00 AM
WOW!!! Now THAT'S A SNEEZE!!! One you'll never forget I bet!!! LOL XOX
Date: 6/11/2018 5:48:00 AM
Get the kleenex ready, you don't want to mess up the furniture.
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Jack Ellison
Date: 6/11/2018 6:05:00 AM
OR fellow human beans! YUKSIES!!!
Date: 6/11/2018 5:21:00 AM
Be careful you blow off your nose...Nice imagery here...All the best Jack
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Jack Ellison
Date: 6/11/2018 5:25:00 AM
Everybody knows (nose) this joy!!!! Good morning friend!!!

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