A Violent Sneeze

The best thing in life is a really good sneeze Explodes with such ferocity, it brings down trees Actually thrills me no end Torn undies it does rend Makes a hurricane seem like a gentle wee breeze
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Pigeon Tart Avatar
June 11, 2018 at 6:21 AM
Lol! I had a sneeze blow a rib out a few weeks ago, I can attest! ;) xomo!
Ellison Avatar
June 11, 2018 at 6:37 AM
WOW!!! Now THAT'S A SNEEZE!!! One you'll never forget I bet!!! LOL XOX
Cunningham Avatar
June 11, 2018 at 5:48 AM
Get the kleenex ready, you don't want to mess up the furniture.
Ellison Avatar
June 11, 2018 at 6:05 AM
OR fellow human beans! YUKSIES!!!
Michael Avatar
June 11, 2018 at 5:21 AM
Be careful you blow off your nose...Nice imagery here...All the best Jack
Ellison Avatar
June 11, 2018 at 5:25 AM
Everybody knows (nose) this joy!!!! Good morning friend!!!
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