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A Vine In Winter

A vine in winter… stripped of its leafy clothes shivers in forlorn silence as it sways and scrapes at the colorless sky. She walks alone… in a barren, winter field hoping to find a way past her tears stinging tears, of loss and sadness burdening and weighing her down. A sudden choking chill of frost… descends upon the vine frozen fingers cling mercilessly threatening to break it from its brittle, hardened spine. She looks up at the hazy sky… the obscure, distant sun still shines and a quiet hope begins to germinate as her desperation dissipates. A shoot sprouts anew on the vine… …her revival has begun.

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Date: 3/4/2025 2:57:00 AM
unique. congratulations on your win dear poet. cheers!!!
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Laura Leiser
Date: 3/4/2025 9:20:00 PM
Thank you! :)
Date: 2/19/2025 3:10:00 PM
the obscure, distant sun still shines… Great poem, Laura!
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Laura Leiser
Date: 2/19/2025 8:58:00 PM
Thank you, Kim! :)
Date: 2/18/2025 11:49:00 AM
Wonder poem, Laura! Hope and renewal do indeed bloom even in times of winter! Really nice analogy. Best wishes for the contest. Blessings! Wonderful to see you posting again like the fruitful vine!
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Laura Leiser
Date: 2/18/2025 2:29:00 PM
Thank you, Sam! I’m trying to write more again. I appreciate your kind comments! :)
Date: 2/18/2025 6:24:00 AM
Nice personification you did here Laura. Renewal equals healing is what I get from it. Have a great week! Good to see you writing
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Laura Leiser
Date: 2/18/2025 7:44:00 AM
Thank you, Tom! Yes, that’s the message I wanted to convey. :)
Date: 2/18/2025 5:53:00 AM
Love the hopefulness of your words, Laura!
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Laura Leiser
Date: 2/18/2025 7:44:00 AM
Thank you, Kim! :)
Date: 2/18/2025 3:02:00 AM
Lovely poem GL in the contest
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Laura Leiser
Date: 2/18/2025 7:43:00 AM
Thank you Terry!
Date: 2/17/2025 9:56:00 PM
Beautiful poem penned. enjoyable the poetic expression...
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Laura Leiser
Date: 2/17/2025 10:00:00 PM
Thank you, Mahayana! I’m glad you enjoyed it! :)

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