A Vine In Winter

A vine in winter…
stripped of its leafy clothes
shivers in forlorn silence 
as it sways and scrapes at the colorless sky. 

She walks alone…
in a barren, winter field
hoping to find a way past her tears
stinging tears, of loss and sadness 
burdening and weighing her down. 

A sudden choking chill of frost…
descends upon the vine
frozen fingers cling mercilessly 
threatening to break it
from its brittle, hardened spine. 

She looks up at the hazy sky…
the obscure, distant sun still shines
and a quiet hope begins to germinate 
as her desperation dissipates.

A shoot sprouts anew on the vine…
…her revival has begun.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025



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Date: 3/4/2025 2:57:00 AM
unique. congratulations on your win dear poet. cheers!!!
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Laura Leiser
Date: 3/4/2025 9:20:00 PM
Thank you! :)
Date: 2/19/2025 3:10:00 PM
the obscure, distant sun still shines… Great poem, Laura!
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Laura Leiser
Date: 2/19/2025 8:58:00 PM
Thank you, Kim! :)
Date: 2/18/2025 11:49:00 AM
Wonder poem, Laura! Hope and renewal do indeed bloom even in times of winter! Really nice analogy. Best wishes for the contest. Blessings! Wonderful to see you posting again like the fruitful vine!
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Laura Leiser
Date: 2/18/2025 2:29:00 PM
Thank you, Sam! I’m trying to write more again. I appreciate your kind comments! :)
Date: 2/18/2025 6:24:00 AM
Nice personification you did here Laura. Renewal equals healing is what I get from it. Have a great week! Good to see you writing
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Laura Leiser
Date: 2/18/2025 7:44:00 AM
Thank you, Tom! Yes, that’s the message I wanted to convey. :)
Date: 2/18/2025 5:53:00 AM
Love the hopefulness of your words, Laura!
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Laura Leiser
Date: 2/18/2025 7:44:00 AM
Thank you, Kim! :)
Date: 2/18/2025 3:02:00 AM
Lovely poem GL in the contest
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Laura Leiser
Date: 2/18/2025 7:43:00 AM
Thank you Terry!
Date: 2/17/2025 9:56:00 PM
Beautiful poem penned. enjoyable the poetic expression...
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Laura Leiser
Date: 2/17/2025 10:00:00 PM
Thank you, Mahayana! I’m glad you enjoyed it! :)
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