Dale Gregory Cozart Poet Rhyme

A View of the Vineyard

The chartreuse pearls hung on the pregnant vine
as whispered jade of leaves in autumn breeze.
The necklaces of trellis did entwine
like clefs of absinthe notes in verdant keys.

3/5/18

Original poem:  Grape Harvest
10/20/17

Rithium Divisa 2 Contest
Sponsor:  Gregory R Barden

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Suzanne Delaney October 9, 2023 at 4:46 AM Love the imagery in this one , Dale: Welcome back and keep on writing. SuZ

John Hamilton May 26, 2020 at 10:44 AM Nice to read this one today Dale hope you are well and will write again soon, you are missed! Dale Gregory Cozart May 26, 2020 at 12:44 PM Thanks very much, John.

Eve Roper April 25, 2020 at 3:22 PM Such a beautiful insert of your poem, Dale. Love the imagery. Eve Dale Gregory Cozart April 25, 2020 at 6:18 PM Thank you so much, Eve.

Andrea Dietrich April 18, 2020 at 12:08 PM Amazingly beautiful, Dale, as always. Congrats on your win.

John Watt April 18, 2020 at 9:07 AM Dale, lovely flow of iambic pentameter in your lush description of the grape harvest. "The chartreuse pearls"... congrats on your win in Greg's contest. Dale Gregory Cozart April 25, 2020 at 6:18 PM Thank you, John.

Gregory Richard Barden April 18, 2020 at 8:34 AM Congratulations on your well-deserved 10th place in the Rithimus Divisa Poetry Contest, Dale - this was a VERY close contest, with so many wonderful writes - blessings! :o)

Susan Ashley April 9, 2020 at 3:54 PM Your beautiful artistry entwines with my imagination in the most spectacular way, Dale. Such an elegant and lovely view indeed! Warmest wishes always, dear poet.. ~Susan Dale Gregory Cozart April 9, 2020 at 9:01 PM Thanks so much, Susan, lovely to hear from you.

Heidi Sands March 5, 2020 at 10:16 AM Very nice! :) Dale Gregory Cozart March 5, 2020 at 10:51 AM Thank you, Heidi.

Line Gauthier March 5, 2020 at 8:58 AM Wowza. Beautiful, Dale. Dale Gregory Cozart March 5, 2020 at 10:51 AM Thanks very much, Line.