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A View of the Vineyard

The chartreuse pearls hung on the pregnant vine as whispered jade of leaves in autumn breeze. The necklaces of trellis did entwine like clefs of absinthe notes in verdant keys. 3/5/18 Original poem: Grape Harvest 10/20/17 Rithium Divisa 2 Contest Sponsor: Gregory R Barden

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Date: 5/26/2020 10:44:00 AM
Nice to read this one today Dale hope you are well and will write again soon, you are missed!
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Date: 5/26/2020 12:44:00 PM
Thanks very much, John.
Date: 4/25/2020 3:22:00 PM
Such a beautiful insert of your poem, Dale. Love the imagery. Eve
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 4/25/2020 6:18:00 PM
Thank you so much, Eve.
Date: 4/18/2020 12:08:00 PM
Amazingly beautiful, Dale, as always. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 4/18/2020 9:07:00 AM
Dale, lovely flow of iambic pentameter in your lush description of the grape harvest. "The chartreuse pearls"... congrats on your win in Greg's contest.
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 4/25/2020 6:18:00 PM
Thank you, John.
Date: 4/18/2020 8:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your well-deserved 10th place in the Rithimus Divisa Poetry Contest, Dale - this was a VERY close contest, with so many wonderful writes - blessings! :o)
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Date: 4/9/2020 3:54:00 PM
Your beautiful artistry entwines with my imagination in the most spectacular way, Dale. Such an elegant and lovely view indeed! Warmest wishes always, dear poet.. ~Susan
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 4/9/2020 9:01:00 PM
Thanks so much, Susan, lovely to hear from you.
Date: 3/5/2020 10:16:00 AM
Very nice! :)
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 3/5/2020 10:51:00 AM
Thank you, Heidi.
Date: 3/5/2020 8:58:00 AM
Wowza. Beautiful, Dale.
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 3/5/2020 10:51:00 AM
Thanks very much, Line.