A View From The Ocean Lookout


The scale and might 
is hypnotic - I almost
clamour for breath
as I look down 
from the clifftop
into the churn 
and deep throated rumble
of a swell heaving upwards
to gulp at rock, weed and air
in a frenzy of foam.

There is a strange
gravity exerted by such
power that seems
to pull upon the mind,
to feel my fragile life 
lipped on the edge
of a plummeting drop
a mere step or stumble
away from death.

I anchor myself
to the ledge, dare to lean
forward and stare 
into that which awaits 
if I were to fall, 
to glimpse nothingness,
oblivion or something more,
a floating shred, 
the leftover foam 
from the source of it all.
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October 5, 2026 at 3:39 AM
This was a beautiful poem to discover in a moment of overwhelm - we've all stood in such a spot & wondered at the power of the ocean, negatively charged ions are so powerful to make us feel in the presence of something that halts our thoughts, think "ahh not today oblivion", does it kiss us on the cheek & send us on our way recombubulated? Something occurs, that's for sure... Might take a trip to a waterfall til I can get to the shore. Amazing poetry, simply amazing!
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