A View From My Window Not For Contest

As I stayed by my window watching the reddish-
yellow sunset while the sky was a bit wailing
It reflected onto the ocean as the sun reflects onto the moon
wave upon wave as many a grouped of penguin was
playing at the coastline while some was swimming,
their minds were so free to themselves as balloons in the breeze
Without sign of hatred or distress. What a great
fun they had with bliss; those creatures are of two
colours white and black and some have yellow patches
I watched them for a while and without a notice my brain
embarked on a jaunt of thinking; how their souls
intertwined with each without clothe of discrimination wore
They cheer with glee, without a doubt is from the
bottom of their hearts. Loving and caring among
the old and young without a restriction a flowing stream
and even they at a time bow
This drew me in awe and wonder
In life of human being where moral is crispy dingy.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Scars Avatar
October 12, 2015 at 7:58 AM
*LOVE* -LU
Hunjeri Avatar
September 18, 2015 at 2:09 PM
I want that window:-). you have a beautiful view and your poem tell it well
Dunn Avatar
September 16, 2015 at 7:47 PM
Dear Afolabi Love the comment you sent for my little poem, I sometimes do know they come from but I hope they never stop, now yours flows seemlessly, and I love the whole piece congrads on the awesome work of yours it is a well deserved win, cheri
Tor Avatar
September 16, 2015 at 4:49 PM
Afolabi what a delight to read my friend. You do an excellent work here with this wonderful write congratulations.
Onclaud Avatar
September 16, 2015 at 2:26 PM
how introspective and deep, afolabi... lovely work!.. huggs
Trifiatis Avatar
September 16, 2015 at 5:08 AM
Parade of beautiful, descriptive expressions that delight the heart and mind! Keep wondering my friend, Afolabi for wonder is the source of knowledge!
Dietrich Avatar
September 16, 2015 at 1:52 AM
oh this brought back to me my memories of seeing that movie called March of the Penguins. They are such lovely creatures the way they intermingle! Great poem.
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