A View From a Hospital Room

Checked the small view from hospital room I did
Doing this deed was just a simple thing
View top of trees but bottom half woods hid
Windows in building right, sun_ clouds mirroring

How many persons from car wreck slain
Thinking continues noise from hall distress
View draws me in_to outside once again
Are the crows high in nest now comfortless

Will my love whom on my bosom kept
Be kept safe_God will heal I am quite
Sure, even though now the time light has crept
The deciding factor will be tonight

At our home will he come once again to face
All the love and happiness in this place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Cheeseman Avatar
December 31, 2010 at 12:46 PM
Enjoyed this fine write Happy new year friend
Culverhouse Avatar
December 31, 2010 at 7:46 AM
good one
Sweetheart Avatar
December 30, 2010 at 7:20 PM
Being exposed to hospital environment brings new luv for life in general and so much to absorb visiting a loved one Sara... u have penned this one to express the sadness of tragedy but hope of recovery too.. all will be well with Tommy too.. keep faith growing and glowing my friend with luv..
Mehta Avatar
December 30, 2010 at 2:15 PM
Yes,Keep faith in God and he will surely come to feel your love and happiness of the home, Sara.
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