Get Your Premium Membership

A View

Every time I look into your face, it slides from gladness to gloom. I don’t know where or when I lost you, but it seems to soon. When each day starts fresh, I have hope in my heart as I catch sight of your shimmering smile and flowing red hair, I know God is proud he created beauty such as yours to share. Where did I go wrong? What have I done to have this pain stacked upon my shoulders? To endure the hollowness I feel. When our eyes fall on one another’s view, you see what I and I see what you and as the spears of shooting white light subside, we fall in love again, you with me and me with you because we caught a glimpse of each others view. © 2010 Charles Dennis http://www.charlesdennis.netne.net

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 4/7/2010 1:08:00 PM
The emotion comes through your words. With each fresh day there is hope. Thanks for that message. Keep on writing. Karen
Login to Reply

Book: Reflection on the Important Things