A View

Every time I look into your face, it slides from gladness to 
gloom. I don’t know where or when I lost you, but it seems to 
soon.

When each day starts fresh, I have hope in my heart  as I catch 
sight of your shimmering smile and flowing red hair, I know God 
is proud he created beauty such as yours to share.

Where did I go wrong? What have I done to have this pain 
stacked upon my shoulders? To endure the hollowness I feel. 

When our eyes fall on one another’s view, you see what I and I 
see what you and as the spears of shooting white light subside, 
we fall in love again, you with me and me with you because we 
caught a glimpse of each others view.



© 2010 Charles Dennis


http://www.charlesdennis.netne.net
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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April 7, 2010 at 1:08 PM
The emotion comes through your words. With each fresh day there is hope. Thanks for that message. Keep on writing. Karen
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