A Very Old Engraved Heart

LOOKING IN MY OLD ROOM, CLEANING OUT
THE HOUSE AFTER MY MOTHER ENTERED HER
FINAL REST, AS I LOOKED AT THE WALLS THAT
ONCE KNEW EVERY SECRET IN MY TENDER HEART

THE WINDOW THAT I WOULD LOOK OUT, AND SEE
THE STREET LIGHT BELOW DANCE MAGICLY WITH
SHADOWS OF SO MANY SUMMER EVENINGS THAT
CARRIED MY MIND TO A TRANQUIL SLUMBER


CLEANING OUT THE OLD ROOM, HAD REALLY
BROUGHT BACK ALOT OF HAPPY MEMORIES,
AND WITH A WARM SMILE I CLEANED THE CLOSET 
SHELF FILLED WITH DUST AND SAW ON THE 
SIDE THERE WAS A HEART ENGRAVED WITH
TWO YOUNG LOVERS NAME WITH AN ARROW MARKED
FOREVER..... I STOPPED, AND THE MUSIC SANG IN MY
HEART, AS I THEN WONDERED IN MY MIND DAYS 
WHEN LIFE WAS SO SWEETER AND INNOCENT

NOW, I HAVE CLEANED AND EMPTIED THIS ROOM
FOR THE LAST BUT AS I CLOSED THE DOOR
I STOPPED AND WENT BACK TO THE CLOSET, 
AND TOUCHED A VERY OLD ENGRAVED HEART.......
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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November 9, 2008 at 7:34 PM
Bonnie this is so touching you are such a sentimentalist and you have such a tender loving heart. I reall felt touched by this wonderful write. Please write some more you have a wonderful gift. I cant comment no more I might have to re read your poetry and post more comments if you dont write soon. lol I hope life is treating you kindly your friend Michael Torres God bless you and your's I would love more of your insight on the rest of mypoetry if you have the time to comment. Thanks Michael
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November 8, 2008 at 7:05 PM
Interesting story in poetry form. It has a tender side that I can relate to. The all capitals format make this more difficult to read than if it was in standard format. It may be something to consider if you want to publish it elsewhere. Thank you for sharing your talent with us and for your kind words regarding my poem. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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