A Veil Softly Floats

Waterdroplets like diamonds bright
Reflected by morn's sun
Glisten 'pon the tender Maple
Then sun behind cloud runs

The fog has covered the forest
Wrapping in a damp coat
Cool garment of moisture surrounds
Like a veil softly floats
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Duncan Avatar
June 23, 2013 at 6:26 PM
Oh, I like this Sara ;} I think I should try writing more like this,,,, though not sure that I'm as good as you ;} Pitch perfect dreams is mostly made - up ;}
Sivey Avatar
June 19, 2013 at 8:11 PM
This is such a beautiful and wondrous write my friend! I truly loved reading this enlightening poem this evening! What a tremendous piece, Great Work!!
Ryerson Avatar
June 19, 2013 at 4:19 PM
'A veil softly floats'...Beautiful title for an equally beautiful poem, Sarah...Thanks for sharing this - Tim
Dietrich Avatar
June 19, 2013 at 3:13 PM
floating like magic, Sara. How are you feeling today? I hope things are starting to look up for you. I hope this for me and Joe too!!
Gorelick Avatar
June 19, 2013 at 2:42 PM
wonderful and misty...I love it. BG
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