A Varicolored Bloom

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anthers of orange and gold a large pink bloom soaks the sun light pink here and dark pink there with streaks of purple fragrance fills the summertime forever lived in one day beauty sensed by the senses never unnoticed

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 8/22/2021 3:54:00 PM

Lovely as the flower, delicate as its perfume Evelyn. A lovely summer smile unfolding. Are you going to enter the Kaleidoscope contest? Blessings of beauty my friend!

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/22/2021 7:38:00 PM

Thank you for your delightful comments, Sam. I just entered the Kaleidoscope contest, with my poem, The Color of Laughter. What was I thinking??!! It didn't occur to me to check the rules to see if I had a qualifying poem until you mentioned it just now. Thank you so much for helping me think of it. Blessings of beauty to you also, dear friend.

Eve Roper

Date: 8/21/2021 11:20:00 PM

Love the poem, Evelyn.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/22/2021 9:29:00 AM

I'm so glad! Thank you, Eve.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 8/21/2021 10:50:00 PM

Loved your poem but sadly summer has little fragrance in Malta, at least where I live .

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/22/2021 9:32:00 AM

Fortunately flowers delight more than one sense. Thank you for the compliment. :)

Shirley Hawkins

Date: 8/21/2021 9:19:00 PM

Lovely Poem, I could see the blooms and smell their fragrance as I read it. Thank you, Evelyn. Take care...Shirley

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/21/2021 9:59:00 PM

Thank you very much, Shirley. That is so nice to hear. I'm very glad the experience was vivid for you. Evelyn :)