A Valentine Poem

He gave her a bunch of roses
deep red and highly scented
sweetly he romanticizes

With loving heart, her, he teases
with his love before her casted
he gave her a bunch of roses

Some may think he needs new lenses
for with comeliness not gifted
sweetly he romanticizes

With all her sweetness she cleanses
a pure soul she had been granted
he gave her a bunch of roses

Her sense of fun amuses 
with her he is so enchanted
sweetly he romanticizes

Over which ring he agonizes
choosing one that could be flaunted
he gave her a bunch of roses
sweetly he romanticizes

I wrote this for a reading I am doing on Valentine's Day yet it is also for all lovers everywhere
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Davis Avatar
May 26, 2014 at 10:41 PM
Shadow Such a lovely and romantic write Full of passion and sweetness that comes from the heart. Thank you for the great comment on my Beauty poem.
A. Sharma Avatar
May 6, 2014 at 10:39 AM
Lovely love Rhyming here Shadow! A wonderful write !
Hamilton Avatar
May 6, 2014 at 4:32 PM
ty Doc Upma hugs
Kayode Avatar
February 4, 2014 at 4:57 PM
This is nice Shadow,a solace to many that might have got no any love message in this season of love. Great poem, great mission , great effect. Kudos. Kayod5.
Hamilton Avatar
February 5, 2014 at 6:35 AM
hi Kayod5 it is the time of lovers glad you enjoyed hugs
Lamoureux Avatar
February 4, 2014 at 9:35 AM
Lovers everywhere are sighing.
Hamilton Avatar
February 4, 2014 at 10:09 AM
hi Rick ty sweet man hugs
Sivey Avatar
February 4, 2014 at 6:42 AM
This is such a sweet write my friend! I really enjoyed reading htis enlightening poem this morning! You have encapsulated the feeling of love within this powerful poem here Shadow! What a brilliant piece, Great Work!!
Hamilton Avatar
February 4, 2014 at 10:09 AM
hi Russell ty so much I appreciate greatly your comments hugs
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