S.Jagathsimhan Nair Poet Acrostic

A Valentine Poem 1

A valentine poem

YOU and I just do not make up a TWO
ARE we not already one, as it WERE
MINE is a life surely with yours ENTWINED
FOR no other pair would’ve loved each other MORE
EVER to remain so, and to fail NEVER.

Encoded Message: “ You are mine for ever. Never more entwined were two”. 
(The message is decoded by putting together the first words of the lines in the top-to-bottom order  and the last words in the reverse order.)

Form: Acrostic
13th Jan 13

For Suzette Crous’ “My valentine” contest (with a coded secret message)

Now.. entry for PD's 'Valentine poem' contest...dated 14 Feb 13

S.Jagathsimhan Nair.

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Ralph Taylor February 17, 2013 at 5:07 PM Congrats, Jag. Excellent piece. Nice going. Ralph

Anne-Lise Andresen February 17, 2013 at 5:04 AM - A sweet Valentine's poems, it had to win! - CONGRATULATIONS, JAG !! - Have a beautiful Sunday. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Len Gasun February 16, 2013 at 10:44 PM Big congratulations my dear friend SJ for your very sweet and unique write and double fantastic win!! I enjoyed reading again your great Valentines poem! love/hugs, Leonora

Joseph May February 16, 2013 at 6:08 PM very creative...congrats on your win

Richard Lamoureux February 16, 2013 at 4:40 PM Well done, I like the hidden message. Congrats on win.

Debbie Guzzi February 16, 2013 at 3:35 PM Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Audrey Haick February 16, 2013 at 3:18 PM Congratulations a very fine win, Jag!

Poet Destroyer A February 16, 2013 at 2:14 PM Jag, CONGRATULATIONS :-) with your lovely and wonderful poem. always & forever *LINDA

Sukmawati Komala February 15, 2013 at 8:55 AM hi my dearest frined JAG.. how i adore your kindness and supports.. thanks for always submit your encouragement and comments.. appreciate is so much... and Happy Valentine always.. <3 <3 <3 luv and hugs :) Sk

Kenisha Shines February 1, 2013 at 8:00 AM congrats !very well written.

Sean L Sanders January 30, 2013 at 9:00 AM Very touching excellent poem written by a very good poet. I saw that you view another poet named Margherita Russo she's only 14 and I know it would mean alot for her to have you read her newest poem if you have the time. Thank you very much.

Len Gasun January 26, 2013 at 9:54 PM Congratulations for a very creative and lovely Valentines Poem and awesome win my dear friend, SJ! Thanks for sharing it, too! love/hugs, Leonora

Connie Marcum Wong January 26, 2013 at 8:51 PM A very creative poem and congratulations on your number one win!

Poet Destroyer A January 26, 2013 at 4:46 PM Good day Jag... congratulations in Suzette's sweet sweet " VALENTINE" contest. Always & forever * LINDA

Audrey Haick January 26, 2013 at 1:40 PM Congratulations on your Ist Place win with this beauty! Always, Annalise

Debbie Guzzi January 26, 2013 at 10:30 AM Congrad's on your win in this contest it wasn't an easy challenge! Light & Love

Sharon Smith January 26, 2013 at 9:18 AM Congratulations on your first place win! Well deserved!

Carrie Richards January 26, 2013 at 9:16 AM Wow.......this was clever !!! Great job!!

Richard Lamoureux January 26, 2013 at 8:09 AM Very well done, clever girl! Congrats

Bukang Liwayway January 26, 2013 at 7:32 AM congratulations on your a grand win friend Jag. A winner indeed!! awesome write!! Hugs, maria

Anne-Lise Andresen January 26, 2013 at 6:57 AM This poem deserved to win - Congratulations on your first place, Jag!! - Have a lovely weekend! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Debbie Guzzi January 21, 2013 at 4:02 PM Thanks for stopping by my writes! Makes sure you put on the bottom HOW to decode the message Su wants that too. Light & Love

Andrea Dietrich January 18, 2013 at 4:48 PM this is really nice, Jag. I like the form you used and also the sweet encoded message. Sure to be a winner.

Anne-Lise Andresen January 13, 2013 at 3:14 PM Pure and forever ....... - Good luck in the contest, Jag. - Hope the new week will be a nice week, it's all yours. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

David Williams January 13, 2013 at 10:55 AM Jag, very well done, it's coming to that time of year again, good luck...David

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