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A Valentine Poem 1

A valentine poem YOU and I just do not make up a TWO ARE we not already one, as it WERE MINE is a life surely with yours ENTWINED FOR no other pair would’ve loved each other MORE EVER to remain so, and to fail NEVER. Encoded Message: “ You are mine for ever. Never more entwined were two”. (The message is decoded by putting together the first words of the lines in the top-to-bottom order and the last words in the reverse order.) Form: Acrostic 13th Jan 13 For Suzette Crous’ “My valentine” contest (with a coded secret message) Now.. entry for PD's 'Valentine poem' contest...dated 14 Feb 13 S.Jagathsimhan Nair.

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Ralph Taylor

Date: 2/17/2013 5:07:00 PM

Congrats, Jag. Excellent piece. Nice going. Ralph

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/17/2013 5:04:00 AM

- A sweet Valentine's poems, it had to win! - CONGRATULATIONS, JAG !! - Have a beautiful Sunday. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Len Gasun

Date: 2/16/2013 10:44:00 PM

Big congratulations my dear friend SJ for your very sweet and unique write and double fantastic win!! I enjoyed reading again your great Valentines poem! love/hugs, Leonora

Joseph May

Date: 2/16/2013 6:08:00 PM

very creative...congrats on your win

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 2/16/2013 4:40:00 PM

Well done, I like the hidden message. Congrats on win.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/16/2013 3:35:00 PM

Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Audrey Haick

Date: 2/16/2013 3:18:00 PM

Congratulations a very fine win, Jag!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/16/2013 2:14:00 PM

Jag, CONGRATULATIONS :-) with your lovely and wonderful poem. always & forever *LINDA

Sukmawati Komala

Date: 2/15/2013 8:55:00 AM

hi my dearest frined JAG.. how i adore your kindness and supports.. thanks for always submit your encouragement and comments.. appreciate is so much... and Happy Valentine always.. <3 <3 <3 luv and hugs :) Sk

Kenisha Shines

Date: 2/1/2013 8:00:00 AM

congrats !very well written.

Sean L Sanders

Date: 1/30/2013 9:00:00 AM

Very touching excellent poem written by a very good poet. I saw that you view another poet named Margherita Russo she's only 14 and I know it would mean alot for her to have you read her newest poem if you have the time. Thank you very much.

Len Gasun

Date: 1/26/2013 9:54:00 PM

Congratulations for a very creative and lovely Valentines Poem and awesome win my dear friend, SJ! Thanks for sharing it, too! love/hugs, Leonora

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/26/2013 8:51:00 PM

A very creative poem and congratulations on your number one win!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/26/2013 4:46:00 PM

Good day Jag... congratulations in Suzette's sweet sweet " VALENTINE" contest. Always & forever * LINDA

Audrey Haick

Date: 1/26/2013 1:40:00 PM

Congratulations on your Ist Place win with this beauty! Always, Annalise

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/26/2013 10:30:00 AM

Congrad's on your win in this contest it wasn't an easy challenge! Light & Love

Sharon Smith

Date: 1/26/2013 9:18:00 AM

Congratulations on your first place win! Well deserved!

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/26/2013 9:16:00 AM

Wow.......this was clever !!! Great job!!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/26/2013 8:09:00 AM

Very well done, clever girl! Congrats

Bukang Liwayway

Date: 1/26/2013 7:32:00 AM

congratulations on your a grand win friend Jag. A winner indeed!! awesome write!! Hugs, maria

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/26/2013 6:57:00 AM

This poem deserved to win - Congratulations on your first place, Jag!! - Have a lovely weekend! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/21/2013 4:02:00 PM

Thanks for stopping by my writes! Makes sure you put on the bottom HOW to decode the message Su wants that too. Light & Love

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/18/2013 4:48:00 PM

this is really nice, Jag. I like the form you used and also the sweet encoded message. Sure to be a winner.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/13/2013 3:14:00 PM

Pure and forever ....... - Good luck in the contest, Jag. - Hope the new week will be a nice week, it's all yours. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

David Williams

Date: 1/13/2013 10:55:00 AM

Jag, very well done, it's coming to that time of year again, good luck...David