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A Valentine Poem 1

A valentine poem

YOU and I just do not make up a TWO
ARE we not already one, as it WERE
MINE is a life surely with yours ENTWINED
FOR no other pair would’ve loved each other MORE
EVER to remain so, and to fail NEVER.

Encoded Message: “ You are mine for ever. Never more entwined were two”. 
(The message is decoded by putting together the first words of the lines in the top-to-bottom order  and the last words in the reverse order.)

Form: Acrostic
13th Jan 13

For Suzette Crous’ “My valentine” contest (with a coded secret message)

Now.. entry for PD's 'Valentine poem' contest...dated 14 Feb 13

S.Jagathsimhan Nair.

Copyright © S.Jagathsimhan Nair | Year Posted 2013

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Ralph Taylor Date: 2/17/2013 5:07:00 PM Congrats, Jag. Excellent piece. Nice going. Ralph Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/17/2013 5:04:00 AM - A sweet Valentine's poems, it had to win! - CONGRATULATIONS, JAG !! - Have a beautiful Sunday. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Len Gasun Date: 2/16/2013 10:44:00 PM Big congratulations my dear friend SJ for your very sweet and unique write and double fantastic win!! I enjoyed reading again your great Valentines poem! love/hugs, Leonora Login to Reply

Joseph May Date: 2/16/2013 6:08:00 PM very creative...congrats on your win Login to Reply

Richard Lamoureux Date: 2/16/2013 4:40:00 PM Well done, I like the hidden message. Congrats on win. Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 2/16/2013 3:35:00 PM Congrad's on your win. Light & Love Login to Reply

Audrey Haick Date: 2/16/2013 3:18:00 PM Congratulations a very fine win, Jag! Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 2/16/2013 2:14:00 PM Jag, CONGRATULATIONS :-) with your lovely and wonderful poem. always & forever *LINDA Login to Reply

Sukmawati Komala Date: 2/15/2013 8:55:00 AM hi my dearest frined JAG.. how i adore your kindness and supports.. thanks for always submit your encouragement and comments.. appreciate is so much... and Happy Valentine always.. <3 <3 <3 luv and hugs :) Sk Login to Reply

Kenisha Shines Date: 2/1/2013 8:00:00 AM congrats !very well written. Login to Reply

Sean L Sanders Date: 1/30/2013 9:00:00 AM Very touching excellent poem written by a very good poet. I saw that you view another poet named Margherita Russo she's only 14 and I know it would mean alot for her to have you read her newest poem if you have the time. Thank you very much. Login to Reply

Len Gasun Date: 1/26/2013 9:54:00 PM Congratulations for a very creative and lovely Valentines Poem and awesome win my dear friend, SJ! Thanks for sharing it, too! love/hugs, Leonora Login to Reply

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 1/26/2013 8:51:00 PM A very creative poem and congratulations on your number one win! Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 1/26/2013 4:46:00 PM Good day Jag... congratulations in Suzette's sweet sweet " VALENTINE" contest. Always & forever * LINDA Login to Reply

Audrey Haick Date: 1/26/2013 1:40:00 PM Congratulations on your Ist Place win with this beauty! Always, Annalise Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 1/26/2013 10:30:00 AM Congrad's on your win in this contest it wasn't an easy challenge! Light & Love Login to Reply

Sharon Smith Date: 1/26/2013 9:18:00 AM Congratulations on your first place win! Well deserved! Login to Reply

Carrie Richards Date: 1/26/2013 9:16:00 AM Wow.......this was clever !!! Great job!! Login to Reply

Richard Lamoureux Date: 1/26/2013 8:09:00 AM Very well done, clever girl! Congrats Login to Reply

Bukang Liwayway Date: 1/26/2013 7:32:00 AM congratulations on your a grand win friend Jag. A winner indeed!! awesome write!! Hugs, maria Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/26/2013 6:57:00 AM This poem deserved to win - Congratulations on your first place, Jag!! - Have a lovely weekend! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 1/21/2013 4:02:00 PM Thanks for stopping by my writes! Makes sure you put on the bottom HOW to decode the message Su wants that too. Light & Love Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/18/2013 4:48:00 PM this is really nice, Jag. I like the form you used and also the sweet encoded message. Sure to be a winner. Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/13/2013 3:14:00 PM Pure and forever ....... - Good luck in the contest, Jag. - Hope the new week will be a nice week, it's all yours. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

David Williams Date: 1/13/2013 10:55:00 AM Jag, very well done, it's coming to that time of year again, good luck...David Login to Reply

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