A Valentine Message

The way to melt a lass’s heart
Is to give her one single rose.
It will be more precious to her than
A dozen or two dozen roses.
It sends a message that she is the ONE.
The one lass in your life, the one you love!
A hand written note to accompany it. . .
She will save forever, and she will probably
Press that rose in a book to be cherished.

Many lads seem to think bigger is better. . .
Not true for a lass with a true heart.
If she gushes over the single rose you give her. . . 
Then her heart is as pure as her love for you.
Pick a Valentine card with great thought
And care, and if you attempt to write how 
You feel about her in your own hand
Be prepared to share the best 
Valentine’s Day of your life!


*Note: This message is from a lady with many years of experience who also
has raised three daughters. Happy Valentine's Day!.....I will be away on a trip for 
two weeks to see my first grandson who is almost a month old, so I will not be able to 
comment  on your poetry as often until my return.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 2/13/2010 2:51:00 PM
great advice in this Valentine for some of us less romantically sophisticated types. Dang it! I guess I gotta ditch the cactus plant! Have a great trip Connie and congrats on your precious grand son! Robert
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Date: 2/13/2010 2:33:00 PM
Thank you so much for your comment on my poetry, I truly appreciate it. I love this poem, you have created, such a simple and beautiful message you have written and one I totally agree with, one perfect rose given with love is so much better. Keep the pen flowing, dear heart..... Constance
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Date: 2/13/2010 7:29:00 AM
Congrats on your recent contest success Connie.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today.
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Date: 2/12/2010 10:13:00 PM
Hello Connie. Good advice here. This needed to be written because us men need a little help learning these things lol. I chuckled and made some mental notes while reading this one--for future reference of course. I hope you have a good trip. David
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Date: 2/12/2010 7:24:00 PM
Safe trip Connie and a great poem to leave us with before u voyage off to see the new grandbaby... I have three so I know what joy they bring to your life... kisses to the newbie... and kudos to u for this Valentine write so precious.. the one rose and the ONE.. how perfect.. thankxxx for your nice comments on my poetry tonight also.. since u signed it Aloha.. are u from Hawaii? my very favorite State and place where I want to go forever to live... luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 2/12/2010 7:07:00 PM
A single rose does seem to be the most romantic gesture, Connie. Thank you for sharing this romantic message for Valentine's Day! Love, Carolyn PS - have a great visit with your first grandson!!!
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Date: 2/11/2010 2:42:00 PM
Great Valentines poem. It's very true. Thanks for sharing. Have a great visit with your grandson.
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