A Vacation

Clouds in a blue sky,
Crystal clear, peaceful waters;
Palm trees casting shade.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Poe Avatar
May 6, 2009 at 4:59 PM
What a beautiful state of feeling -Alley
Mason Avatar
April 9, 2009 at 12:58 PM
Absolutely perfect the way the haiku reflects the title. Very well done, Daniel!!
Devonshire Avatar
April 7, 2009 at 4:58 PM
Beautiful description of a tropical paradise, Daniel. I'm ready to take a vacation after reading this! Love, Carolyn
Edmonds Avatar
April 5, 2009 at 5:14 PM
Nice work on you first hot poem, congrats and keep writing.
Goombi Avatar
April 3, 2009 at 8:32 PM
A vacation is what I need and I would visit this place anytime
Martin Avatar
April 3, 2009 at 8:27 PM
A nice place you painted with words, sounds like a great place to be. Tyler
P. Avatar
April 1, 2009 at 9:57 AM
'crystal clear' ... haiku too! ncie one, Daniel! ~ Arany
Gorelick Avatar
March 31, 2009 at 8:58 PM
move over, I'm coming. Nice! BG
Winter Avatar
March 31, 2009 at 7:04 PM
Oh gosh that is simply too inviting. Sigh. Well done. Love, Shar
Shahwan Avatar
March 31, 2009 at 5:00 PM
Blissful haiku. I believe that forth graders need to memorize simple haiku. Please publish every haiku you compose as post cards. All the best.
Chircop Avatar
March 31, 2009 at 4:46 PM
i need this vacation very soon,love it-charma
Neal Avatar
March 31, 2009 at 4:33 PM
Beautiful write little bro, I really enjoyed this one. Love your sis.
Richards Avatar
March 31, 2009 at 4:29 PM
Sounds lovely....I want to be there! ~
Moreno Avatar
March 31, 2009 at 4:05 PM
Nice place you painted, I would love to be there, right under those palm trees writing poetry...Raul
Wilson Avatar
March 31, 2009 at 3:15 PM
Thats were I want to be now but where's the pina colada? Great one Daniel. Leon
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