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A Vacation

Clouds in a blue sky,
Crystal clear, peaceful waters;
Palm trees casting shade.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/6/2009 4:59:00 PM
What a beautiful state of feeling -Alley
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Date: 4/9/2009 12:58:00 PM
Absolutely perfect the way the haiku reflects the title. Very well done, Daniel!!
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Date: 4/7/2009 4:58:00 PM
Beautiful description of a tropical paradise, Daniel. I'm ready to take a vacation after reading this! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/5/2009 5:14:00 PM
Nice work on you first hot poem, congrats and keep writing.
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Date: 4/3/2009 8:32:00 PM
A vacation is what I need and I would visit this place anytime
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Date: 4/3/2009 8:27:00 PM
A nice place you painted with words, sounds like a great place to be. Tyler
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Date: 4/1/2009 9:57:00 AM
'crystal clear' ... haiku too! ncie one, Daniel! ~ Arany
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Date: 3/31/2009 8:58:00 PM
move over, I'm coming. Nice! BG
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Date: 3/31/2009 7:04:00 PM
Oh gosh that is simply too inviting. Sigh. Well done. Love, Shar
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Date: 3/31/2009 5:00:00 PM
Blissful haiku. I believe that forth graders need to memorize simple haiku. Please publish every haiku you compose as post cards. All the best.
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Date: 3/31/2009 4:46:00 PM
i need this vacation very soon,love it-charma
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Date: 3/31/2009 4:33:00 PM
Beautiful write little bro, I really enjoyed this one. Love your sis.
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Date: 3/31/2009 4:29:00 PM
Sounds lovely....I want to be there! ~
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Date: 3/31/2009 4:05:00 PM
Nice place you painted, I would love to be there, right under those palm trees writing poetry...Raul
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Date: 3/31/2009 3:15:00 PM
Thats were I want to be now but where's the pina colada? Great one Daniel. Leon
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