A Urgent Message

Sliding down a slope of slippery soap. 

Colliding with changing emotions.

emotions trapped in sensitive bubbles, popped by impact. 

Standing and falling.

Standing and falling.  

Views from down and up, unveils lessons to be learned.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Brown Avatar
April 19, 2012 at 11:03 AM
Stopping by to say Thank You for your kind comments on my poetry Elliott. It is a pleasure to read your writings. Have a wonderful day. Love, Carol
Mohammed Avatar
April 15, 2012 at 12:22 AM
It's very good Elliott... I t reminds me of the word of God which says '...and having done all, to stand. Stand therefore with your loins gird about with truth'... Thanks for reminding me... Love Diana
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