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A Twist To Robin Hood and His Men Wear Green Spandex

The ground was blanketed with fallen leaves
that crunched under their feet as they ducked
into the bushes and secluded spots behind thick trees
The forest was their domain the comforts of life
as fugitives in hiding they could survive,
it beat capture  and torture.

Emerging on the path came eight horses
with their riders trotting into view
Robin Hood and the others emerged from hiding
knowing they will not be eager to surrender

As the sun starts melting into the horizon bringing in the twilight
Robin Hood and his men knew they were in danger

Why did he feel like he was totally kidding himself?

Jumbling and stumbling they start to dwarf
Their voices had evolved from bass and baritones to tenors
Avoiding getting caught they all backed away and scattered
Bidding the riders farewell, then departing



2/13/2016

Poetry Contest: A twisted poem about Robin Hood - 
 Sponsored by: C. T.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Dahlusion Avatar
February 23, 2016 at 10:41 AM
Bravo, Poet!
A. Sharma Avatar
February 19, 2016 at 10:14 PM
Congrats on ur awesome win with this amazing poem Eve.
Roper Avatar
February 20, 2016 at 5:49 PM
Thank you so much for the congratulations :)
Davey Avatar
February 19, 2016 at 1:52 PM
Congrats on your win Eve
Roper Avatar
February 20, 2016 at 5:49 PM
Thank you so much for the congratulations :)
Allison Avatar
February 19, 2016 at 12:57 PM
a great story Eve - congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Roper Avatar
February 20, 2016 at 5:49 PM
Thank you so much for the congratulations :)
A   Avatar
February 19, 2016 at 12:38 PM
Hi Eve, Congratulations on your Robin Hood twisted win. Love LINDA
Roper Avatar
February 20, 2016 at 5:49 PM
Thank you so much for the congratulations :)
T  Avatar
February 19, 2016 at 11:59 AM
good one Eve. CT
Roper Avatar
February 20, 2016 at 5:50 PM
Thank you so much, C.T., for the honor of picking my poem !!
Showalter Swift Avatar
February 14, 2016 at 6:46 PM
Eve...I had the most distinct impression upon reading this that you are a gifted screen play writer...like velvet...a perfect fit...have you ever or might you consider it? such a natural
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