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A Twist of Fate

Earlier today, I took a voyage of the mind. Looking for a clue, But didn't know what I would find. I soon caught a glimpse, While in a meditative state. A path to my goal, And the solution to my fate. With a flash of light, I felt a vibrant sensation. My heart beating fast, I was full of inspiration. With gun in my hand, Since nothing more could be said. I pulled the trigger, And put a bullet in my head.

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Randy Freie

Date: 2/4/2023 10:50:00 AM

Hey Martin, That's right, I'm still here. I try to write about all aspects of life. The good and bad. I'm sure as you read this, someone on this revolving rock is contemplating doing just that. Oops, there they go. But no, there isn't any hidden meaning behind my words. I just wanted to give the impression that I was going in one direction, then flipping the script the other way. Thanks for your feedback little brother.

Martin Braun

Date: 2/4/2023 3:53:00 AM

Obviously... that did not happen. ;) Please, more poems about guns. They are controversial and inspires creativity. Maybe the bullet was a word... but which word: "truth", "liar"? Or was that word, a name... hmmmmm............