Jack Ellison Poet Limerick

A Twenty-Seven Hour Day

Wonder if I ask politely, the great powers that be
Would increase the day's hours by just two or three
Not asking for much
My heart would be touched
Right now there's not even time for a pee

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Michael Tor August 8, 2020 at 3:11 PM You have to make time to go to the pisser. If not things get wet very fast. Have a nice day Jack, and drink a little less water lol. Michael Tor August 8, 2020 at 8:17 PM Im there now Jack... Jack Ellison August 8, 2020 at 3:17 PM Been counting lately how many time a times a day I need to go... it's too many! See what's ahead for you with age! :(

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart August 8, 2020 at 8:23 AM Careful what you wish for... I wouldn’t put it past man to disrupt the earth’s spin. ;), Good 24hr hugs! xomo Jack Ellison August 8, 2020 at 12:56 PM The hours go round and round but everything stays the same! Hmm disrupting earth's spin! Interesting! Lovesies, Happy Jack XOX

Tom Cunningham August 8, 2020 at 4:47 AM Haha, as we get older we need all the time we can get. Good day Sir Jack Tom Jack Ellison August 8, 2020 at 4:54 AM So damn true!!! Everyone goes through it... Happy Saturday Tom!