A Twenty-First Century Elegy

If there were a tomb to hold my thoughts alone
where only those who seek it, meditate,
guffaws would echo on the heavenly green;
ideas will not live beyond their youth
unless they catch the glint of steel beneath
the torch of battle.  So

let now be the arena for my wars,
my intellect, my flooding heart to charge
at enemies who rise today
but cannot raise the dust of my posterity.
This very hour I choose to fight
amid the phalanx of the white-robed clan.

It is a field of bloodless strife
where victors search beside themselves
for ripening flaws to extricate,
for keys to open doors
that never should have closed,
and for regrets that festered, unexposed.

Then as a spirit leaves its body to embrace
an unknown paradise,
down at the end of that long corridor
a dying candle flame blinks twice
and gives its rising smoke
to cense the larks above.
            ~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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August 10, 2013 at 12:01 PM
don't know how to edit them? it's easy! just click on where it says 'my poems' and it will bring them all up, click on 'edit' beside the poem you want to alter, make the corrections, and then click 'update' at the bottom - sorted! :) butterfly <3
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August 10, 2013 at 1:58 PM
Thanks. Good to see you again! I'm trying to figure out how to message you....it has been so long since I have tried, here!
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July 28, 2013 at 3:22 PM
I enjoyed this poem poet excellent poem poet
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July 28, 2013 at 4:27 AM
good morning Robert, stopping by to say hi thank you, and reading my poems I will be back later this afternoon. enjoy your Sunday. ...linda
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July 28, 2013 at 9:51 AM
looking forward to your comments
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June 11, 2013 at 3:46 PM
Thanks. I submitted no more after this one because I could not get the program to accept my submission And, I've forgotten how to make corrections! Sorry.
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June 11, 2013 at 2:48 PM
This has a beautiful flow and message. There is an 'r' missing from 'for' in L3S3. SuZ
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August 10, 2013 at 2:00 PM
Charlotte just showed me how. Now I can fix the horrible errors! Thanks again. -Dean
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July 28, 2013 at 9:50 AM
Thank you. I still havn't figured out how to edit them
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June 11, 2013 at 3:46 PM
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