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A Truth That I Explored

A TRUTH THAT I EXPLORED sukumar mohanty (1) My sun had already in back, Returning from the field; I saw the twilight tube-well; Eclipsed by the green arms; And lonely in the rust. (2) But I hear the buzzes Flowing from the mewling tap. (3) What truth I explored For which I thought deep and deep, Standing alone in frosted tuft, And my little master giggled wrap by a lot.

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Date: 12/27/2015 1:47:00 PM
:) SKAT
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Date: 9/16/2013 9:31:00 AM
Hi Sukumar,, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Sukumar Mohanty
Date: 9/18/2013 4:51:00 AM
HELLO,,,I am from india ,a ug student.where r u from?
Date: 9/16/2013 5:10:00 AM
Welcome to P-Soup, Sukumar ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/16/2013 4:56:00 AM
Sukumar,, thank you for expressing your write and finding this site. -A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 9/15/2013 11:27:00 PM
Nice one,but too deep meaning.........
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Sukumar Mohanty
Date: 9/15/2013 11:28:00 PM
THANK U

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