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A Truly Inspiring Story

(this write is inspired by the real story of a homeless man who found a student's bag with two thousand nine hundred dollars cash in it. the student was bringing it to pay his tuition fees. without hesitation the homeless man used the information in the bag to return the student his belongings.) void loyd, he’s a bum smells of rum. covered in stink no kitchen sink he got nothing  he’s recovering come see it’s free. void loyd, he’s a bum smells of rum. scum!, right?, no light? hey buddy can you spare a dime? face it, wouldn’t give him the time. finds a sack gives it back twenty-nine hundred in cash didn’t keep it but isn’t he trash? void loyd, he’s a bum smells of rum. what did the student think his fingers covered in ink pockets his money calls his honey tells her loudly proclaims proudly ‘can’t judge a cover by its book, listen to me here’s the hook. school smart or street smart it comes down to the heart. that man lives in a ditch but sweetie he is rich. you have to take a second look never judge a cover by its book.’ void loyd, he’s a bum smells of rum.
8~29~2014 Sponsor: gautami phookan Contest Name: Sketch a Character

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Date: 11/4/2014 10:57:00 AM
Wow, Maurice, I can't believe I missed this precious poem. I absolutely love how you rhymed this so playfully yet masterfully brought out a very wonderful lesson. 7-F
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Date: 11/4/2014 7:28:00 AM
Very good character sketch...congrats on the win
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Date: 11/4/2014 4:33:00 AM
Hi Maurice, congratulations on your win. With just a few lines you have managed to portray him in his entirety and credibility. Well done. xx
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Date: 11/3/2014 8:21:00 PM
Hi Maurice, I really enjoyed your character sketch - it was so interesting and very different. Yes...can't judge people by their outer looks...it's what's inside the heart that counts. Congratulations on your win. Sandra
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Date: 11/3/2014 7:52:00 PM
Nice character sketch, congrats on the win, Maurice
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 11/3/2014 8:23:00 PM
Thank you Dr. Mehta.
Date: 11/3/2014 4:50:00 PM
many congrats Maurice it was lovely reading this one again:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 11/3/2014 4:52:00 PM
Actually he lives in Malta you didn't run in to him did you?
Date: 11/3/2014 12:57:00 PM
I love this Maurice,congrats on the win.
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 11/3/2014 4:53:00 PM
thank you. you are so kind.
Date: 8/29/2014 10:43:00 AM
An amazing story Maurice - I do hope they gave him a reward - his life may be at an all time low but in my eyes he's a hero:-) hugs Jan xx
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 8/29/2014 11:22:00 AM
exactly. as for a reward he would not accept money so the student bought him a coffee.

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