A Truly Inspiring Story

(this write is inspired by the real story of a homeless man who found a student's bag with two thousand nine hundred dollars cash in it. the student was bringing it to pay his tuition fees. without hesitation the homeless man used the information in the bag to return the student his belongings.) void loyd, he’s a bum smells of rum. covered in stink no kitchen sink he got nothing  he’s recovering come see it’s free. void loyd, he’s a bum smells of rum. scum!, right?, no light? hey buddy can you spare a dime? face it, wouldn’t give him the time. finds a sack gives it back twenty-nine hundred in cash didn’t keep it but isn’t he trash? void loyd, he’s a bum smells of rum. what did the student think his fingers covered in ink pockets his money calls his honey tells her loudly proclaims proudly ‘can’t judge a cover by its book, listen to me here’s the hook. school smart or street smart it comes down to the heart. that man lives in a ditch but sweetie he is rich. you have to take a second look never judge a cover by its book.’ void loyd, he’s a bum smells of rum.
8~29~2014 Sponsor: gautami phookan Contest Name: Sketch a Character
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Meier-Hans Avatar
November 4, 2014 at 10:57 AM
Wow, Maurice, I can't believe I missed this precious poem. I absolutely love how you rhymed this so playfully yet masterfully brought out a very wonderful lesson. 7-F
May Avatar
November 4, 2014 at 7:28 AM
Very good character sketch...congrats on the win
Stephens Avatar
November 4, 2014 at 4:33 AM
Hi Maurice, congratulations on your win. With just a few lines you have managed to portray him in his entirety and credibility. Well done. xx
Haight Avatar
November 3, 2014 at 8:21 PM
Hi Maurice, I really enjoyed your character sketch - it was so interesting and very different. Yes...can't judge people by their outer looks...it's what's inside the heart that counts. Congratulations on your win. Sandra
Mehta Avatar
November 3, 2014 at 7:52 PM
Nice character sketch, congrats on the win, Maurice
Yvonne Avatar
November 3, 2014 at 8:23 PM
Thank you Dr. Mehta.
Allison Avatar
November 3, 2014 at 4:50 PM
many congrats Maurice it was lovely reading this one again:-) Hugs Jan xx
Yvonne Avatar
November 3, 2014 at 4:52 PM
Actually he lives in Malta you didn't run in to him did you?
Kayode Avatar
November 3, 2014 at 12:57 PM
I love this Maurice,congrats on the win.
Yvonne Avatar
November 3, 2014 at 4:53 PM
thank you. you are so kind.
Allison Avatar
August 29, 2014 at 10:43 AM
An amazing story Maurice - I do hope they gave him a reward - his life may be at an all time low but in my eyes he's a hero:-) hugs Jan xx
Yvonne Avatar
August 29, 2014 at 11:22 AM
exactly. as for a reward he would not accept money so the student bought him a coffee.
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