A Trip To the Woods

To the great outdoors
my grandparents love to go,
simply for the atmosphere it gives
like when they play Bingo.
I like to walk the trails, the mountains,
to get my wild nature fix.
They both have bad eyesight and can't quite comprehend
these crazy realistic graphics!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 4/21/2013 10:57:00 AM
I like this little trip to the woods, thanks for stopping by my Over heard conversations, that guy was talking so loud, the dead could hear ;}
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 4/22/2013 8:27:00 AM
Obnoxious people tend to get on my nerves, sometimes. Thanks for reading!
Date: 4/18/2013 12:02:00 AM
gosh, I am missing out on a lot of your little poems lately! This one is most interesting!
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 4/18/2013 1:03:00 AM
Haha.. thanks Andrea!
Date: 4/17/2013 9:29:00 PM
this is a very nice trip outdoors. Timothy, a nice high for you I see that they don't see. Thank you for stopping by my poem, It has been an honor reading a few poems of yours tonight. LUV ~*~SKAT
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 4/18/2013 1:02:00 AM
You're so kind Skat! Love your encouraging comments!
Date: 4/17/2013 7:13:00 PM
Excellent verse! I love the outdoors as well. It's always a pleasure reading from you. Keep it up! Always, Laura
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 4/18/2013 1:02:00 AM
Thanks again Laura!
Date: 4/17/2013 2:35:00 PM
Ha...interesting.Im a nature man myself. Im rushed for time but I just wanted to stop and say thanks for your inspiring comments...I'll be back to read more from you when time allows....Caleb.
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 4/18/2013 1:01:00 AM
No problem Caleb! I'm glad you like my work :)
Date: 4/17/2013 7:11:00 AM
Without nature I think we become disconnected. There are some kids in the inner cities who have never experienced nature. Very sad.
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 4/18/2013 1:01:00 AM
I live in a place where cows outnumber people 7 - 1 and there's a lot of mountains. I can't imagine what it's like to live in a place like New York, never seeing so much as a mountain stream.
Date: 4/17/2013 6:35:00 AM
This one hits too close to home! LOL Cheers, The Old Guy!
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 4/18/2013 12:59:00 AM
Hahaha... I just find it funny how different the elderly and the young view the woods. Thanks Jack... you're a hoot!
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