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A Trip Out of This World

walkway to the stars
kaleidoscope nebula
milky way beckons












by Carol Fillmore
for Rick Parise's contest: Haiku Beyond (Nature Only)

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James Foulk

Date: 4/6/2011 7:40:00 PM

good piece of poetry

Eiken Laan

Date: 3/29/2011 10:42:00 AM

Love this, great win Carol:))

Kash Poet

Date: 3/29/2011 9:13:00 AM

Wonderful Haiku!Congrats Carol on your big win!---kashinath

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/28/2011 10:10:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, CArol!

Audrey Haick

Date: 3/28/2011 6:08:00 PM

!!Congratulations on your 6th Place win in the contest, Carol! Beautiful view you captured from the picture! Always, Annalise

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 3/28/2011 2:44:00 PM

Congrad's on your win! Light & Love

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/28/2011 12:53:00 PM

What a great trip you took us on.....a winner indeed!! :) Congratulations!!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/28/2011 12:42:00 PM

Congratulations on the sixth place win in the contest of Rick, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/28/2011 12:40:00 PM

I see the winnerrs are posted now, Carol. Congrats again! Love, Carolyn

John Freeman

Date: 3/28/2011 12:17:00 PM

Congratulations Carol on your sixthplace win...excellent haiku!! Good to see you in the top six. Agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/28/2011 11:57:00 AM

Congrats Carol on your wonderful win in Rick's contest my friend.. with this elegant entry of beautiful words to denote photo luv.. enjoy your top spot where the air is as rare as your lovely words ... thankxx for your sweet comments today.. Nurse "Sweetheart" is getting a work out as hubby is still feeling poorly ..TLC time..luv..

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/28/2011 7:40:00 AM

CLAP clap for garnering a big win in this contest, carol... CHEERS all the way..:) huggs!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/28/2011 7:22:00 AM

Congratulations Carol on your win in ^Rick Parise's contest "Haiku Beyond". Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/27/2011 7:47:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. I sent you Soup Mail that will let you find out where you placed even though the "contest winners" link is broken. Check it out and have a nice evening. Love, Carolyn

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/25/2011 3:40:00 PM

Very nice, Carol, especially the "kaleidoscope nebula" line. It's easy to imagine it that way and the Milky Way beyond beckoning us onward. I have RSVP'd but need to know where the happy couple have registered their gift preferences. LOL Love, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/25/2011 3:23:00 PM

Good luck in the contest..Reads like a winning one for sure..Enjoyed reading it..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work "Far Away View"..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/24/2011 2:19:00 PM

Oh, I really liked how YOUR bridge was a walkway to the stars. Mine was lover's leap. hahaha. This is awesome!

Kash Poet

Date: 3/24/2011 8:12:00 AM

Wonderful approach to the contest photo Carol.Thanks for your kind comment at my page---kashinath

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/24/2011 8:10:00 AM

A fabulous title Carol complimented by wonderful words to express the photo for the contest.. good luck my friend... this is incredible insight especially kaleidoscope nebula..awesome luv.. thankxx again for your encouraging words too..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/24/2011 6:59:00 AM

I must tell you there have been so many diverse poems shared here at PoetrySoup yesterday and this morning that I am just now being able to read. Each one is a treasure to the poet who wrote it. It is a pleasure to me to be able to read them. I am so happy yours was among the ones I have read today Carol and I wish you the best in the contest. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/23/2011 7:34:00 PM

Nice interpretation and equally well worded read of the picture, Carol