A Trip

How does one say good bye,
Today you take a one way trip to heaven.
We will always love you,
Husband-Daughter-Friends.
7/2/2019
Honorable Mention
Note: This week I lost a friend to lung cancer.
Bite Size Poem no.10 Poetry Contest
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Kauffman Avatar
July 7, 2021 at 9:44 AM
Lovely expression of friendship and love my friend. Congratulations on your win.
Goldsmith Avatar
July 9, 2021 at 10:02 AM
Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have a win. Glad you like this write. Have a blessed day writing away................
Alex Avatar
July 6, 2021 at 5:08 AM
Beautiful. Congratulations!
Goldsmith Avatar
July 6, 2021 at 8:52 AM
Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have a win with this write. Have a blessed day writing away................
Salehi Avatar
July 5, 2021 at 9:38 AM
Sorry to hear that. Happy 5 July
Goldsmith Avatar
July 5, 2021 at 1:06 PM
Thank You, for writing. Have a blessed day/week writing away................
Dietrich Avatar
July 4, 2021 at 7:30 PM
this is hitting close to home as I have a friend this is happening to. So sad, Paula. My condolences.
Goldsmith Avatar
July 5, 2021 at 1:05 PM
Thank You, for writing. Glad you like this one. Yes, so very sad. Have a blessed day/week writing away................
May Avatar
July 4, 2021 at 5:37 PM
Sorry your lost your friend Paula, Blessings
Goldsmith Avatar
July 5, 2021 at 1:05 PM
Thank You, for writing. Glad you like this one. Have a blessed day/week writing away................
Ball Avatar
July 4, 2021 at 6:46 AM
My most sincere condolences on your loss Paula. Your friend will always be with you in your heart. This is a fine farewell to her/him. God Bless, JB
Goldsmith Avatar
July 4, 2021 at 8:53 AM
Thank You, for writing. Glad you like this write. Have a blessed day writing away................
Romios Avatar
July 3, 2021 at 11:20 PM
My condolences, Paula. SO DELICATEKY WRITTEN, Best wishes in the contest Pangie xx
Goldsmith Avatar
July 4, 2021 at 8:51 AM
Thank You, for writing and for your best wishes. Have a blessed day writing away................
Cunningham Avatar
July 3, 2021 at 10:57 AM
So sad Paula, so sorry for your loss, the only consolation is she's now at peace and free of pain. Tom
Goldsmith Avatar
July 3, 2021 at 1:07 PM
Thank You, for writing. Yes, you are so right. No more pain and at peace. Have a blessed day/weekend.............
Balasubramanian Avatar
July 3, 2021 at 4:02 AM
It is impossible to say goodbye. May God give you strength and peace
Goldsmith Avatar
July 3, 2021 at 1:06 PM
Thank You, for writing. God is good. Have a blessed day/weekend.............
Horsman Avatar
July 3, 2021 at 1:28 AM
Sad poem, Paula, yet the suffering is over.
Goldsmith Avatar
July 3, 2021 at 1:05 PM
Thank You, for writing. Yes, you are so right. Have a blessed day/weekend.............
Sands Avatar
July 2, 2021 at 12:18 PM
I am saddened to hear that you lost your friend. There are no words to take away the pain. I am glad to see that you are writing. It can help to write. Take care! :)
Goldsmith Avatar
July 3, 2021 at 1:04 PM
Thank You, for writing. I feel so bad for her family. Have a blessed day/weekend.............
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