A Trip

How does one say good bye, Today you take a one way trip to heaven. We will always love you, Husband-Daughter-Friends. 7/2/2019 Honorable Mention Note: This week I lost a friend to lung cancer. Bite Size Poem no.10 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Line Gauthier

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 7/7/2021 9:44:00 AM

Lovely expression of friendship and love my friend. Congratulations on your win.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/9/2021 10:02:00 AM

Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have a win. Glad you like this write. Have a blessed day writing away................

Christuraj Alex

Date: 7/6/2021 5:08:00 AM

Beautiful. Congratulations!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/6/2021 8:52:00 AM

Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have a win with this write. Have a blessed day writing away................

Pashang Salehi

Date: 7/5/2021 9:38:00 AM

Sorry to hear that. Happy 5 July

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/5/2021 1:06:00 PM

Thank You, for writing. Have a blessed day/week writing away................

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/4/2021 7:30:00 PM

this is hitting close to home as I have a friend this is happening to. So sad, Paula. My condolences.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/5/2021 1:05:00 PM

Thank You, for writing. Glad you like this one. Yes, so very sad. Have a blessed day/week writing away................

Joseph May

Date: 7/4/2021 5:37:00 PM

Sorry your lost your friend Paula, Blessings

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/5/2021 1:05:00 PM

Thank You, for writing. Glad you like this one. Have a blessed day/week writing away................

Judy Ball

Date: 7/4/2021 6:46:00 AM

My most sincere condolences on your loss Paula. Your friend will always be with you in your heart. This is a fine farewell to her/him. God Bless, JB

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/4/2021 8:53:00 AM

Thank You, for writing. Glad you like this write. Have a blessed day writing away................

Panagiota Romios

Date: 7/3/2021 11:20:00 PM

My condolences, Paula. SO DELICATEKY WRITTEN, Best wishes in the contest Pangie xx

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/4/2021 8:51:00 AM

Thank You, for writing and for your best wishes. Have a blessed day writing away................

Tom Cunningham

Date: 7/3/2021 10:57:00 AM

So sad Paula, so sorry for your loss, the only consolation is she's now at peace and free of pain. Tom

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/3/2021 1:07:00 PM

Thank You, for writing. Yes, you are so right. No more pain and at peace. Have a blessed day/weekend.............

Rama Balasubramanian

Date: 7/3/2021 4:02:00 AM

It is impossible to say goodbye. May God give you strength and peace

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/3/2021 1:06:00 PM

Thank You, for writing. God is good. Have a blessed day/weekend.............

Harry Horsman

Date: 7/3/2021 1:28:00 AM

Sad poem, Paula, yet the suffering is over.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/3/2021 1:05:00 PM

Thank You, for writing. Yes, you are so right. Have a blessed day/weekend.............

Heidi Sands

Date: 7/2/2021 12:18:00 PM

I am saddened to hear that you lost your friend. There are no words to take away the pain. I am glad to see that you are writing. It can help to write. Take care! :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/3/2021 1:04:00 PM

Thank You, for writing. I feel so bad for her family. Have a blessed day/weekend.............