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A Triolet For Linda

To those you care for, always you impart deep love; how beautiful and sweet you are! I pray you find a way to mend your heart. To those you care for, always you impart poetic gems! Return to this, your art. Grab hold of words and shine again, a star. To those you care for, always you impart deep love; how beautiful and sweet you are! Written 12/6/14 for the Fighting Depression(poems for PD) contest of shadow Hamilton

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Date: 10/22/2016 3:29:00 PM
A beautiful triolet, Andrea. A wonderful tribute as well. Much love from RW.
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Date: 6/19/2016 4:02:00 PM
Elegant and heartfelt, I missed this when it first came out but it deserves it's place as the first link of the Soup's Triolet definition.
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Date: 5/14/2015 5:59:00 AM
Beautiful poem!
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Date: 5/11/2015 1:14:00 AM
Very deeply touching lines. Your writes captivate me with their magical, irresistible charm. A 7. A favorite.
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Date: 3/17/2015 6:54:00 AM
I congratulate you on your Triolet, Andrea! Julia, :)
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Date: 12/28/2014 9:44:00 AM
lovely write here for our friend PD
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Date: 12/27/2014 10:25:00 AM
I love it Andrea,, Congratulations on your win. I'm finally making time to read every entry, intended for me in Shadow's Hamilton depression contest. It was a tough fight, however at the end I prayed, and asked to take over and he did. WOW, it was what I call a miracle. Thanks for lifting my day with this poem... Love LINDA
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Date: 12/27/2014 10:25:00 AM
a 7 and a fav
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Date: 12/15/2014 6:32:00 AM
Lovely...touching and uplifting. I love Triolets...they are so helpful in expressing sentiments and emotions (when they fall in capable hands!). Congrats on a very deserved win. // paul
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Date: 3/17/2015 6:52:00 AM
Exactly.
Date: 12/15/2014 2:19:00 AM
A touching and lovely write Andrea. Big congrats on your win!
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Date: 12/12/2014 8:45:00 AM
Beautifully penned Andrea. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 12/10/2014 9:21:00 AM
This is a moving piece Andrea, I hope it lifts Linda's spirits.
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Date: 12/10/2014 2:01:00 AM
This is a very lovely poem for our beloved friend my very dear friend Andrea. I hope she'll be ok and be back too soon. She's being missed here :(I also wrote one but it was too late for the contest. Well, I thank you so much for sharing and warm congrats on your win! Hugs and cheers! Ty also for your reply on my latest sm. love lots, Leonora
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Date: 12/9/2014 8:48:00 PM
From the heart! Nice.
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Date: 12/9/2014 4:57:00 PM
dropping back with my congrats:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 12/9/2014 11:25:00 AM
Linda should be happy>Noble souls live in deep love.Best wishes,O.B.
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Date: 12/9/2014 8:26:00 AM
Hi Andrea, congratulations on this beautiful Triolet you created for Linda. Your encouraging words flowed like a gentle caress. Sandra
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Date: 12/9/2014 8:22:00 AM
A very loving kindness Andrea. Soon, I hope she lifts her eyes up beyond the rim of depression. Peace. :)
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Date: 12/9/2014 7:59:00 AM
And back again wid big congrats on ur winning superb write!
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Date: 12/9/2014 7:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your big win with this superb triolet!
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Date: 12/9/2014 7:17:00 AM
ndrea...Congrats on your win
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Date: 12/9/2014 6:53:00 AM
congrats Andrea on your win it shows your deep affection for Linda hugs
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Date: 12/8/2014 1:25:00 PM
how uplifting and lovely is this one for PD, andie... i needed something like this as we are in the midst of a super typhoon,, hopefully, it will leave our country tomorrow... hugs!
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Date: 12/8/2014 7:09:00 AM
Beautiful, beautiful poem for Linda. Hopefully this outpouring of love will draw her from depression.
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Date: 12/7/2014 4:21:00 PM
love how this drew for me andrea excellent pen dear friend
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