Pandita Sietesantos Poet Free verse

A Tribute To Jayson, My Brave Warrior

A Tribute to Jayson, My Brave Warrior

My dear son, Jayson
When you called late last night to let me know
You were deploying to go overseas tomorrow
In spite of my great resolve
I broke down and sobbed.

The little boy I lovingly nurtured 
So witty and good-natured
So kind, compassionate, and loving
You’ll always be my sweet boy
Even though the world now sees you as a grown man.

Recalling special times when I showered your baby face with kisses
Or tickled your armpits
Howling with laughter, you would beg me 
“Do it again, Mommy, I love it!”

I remember all those moments we had
At times rocky, sometimes sad 
But most of all memorable and enjoyable.
I remember your growing pains
All your questions, anxieties, and mixed-up emotions
Yes, we made it through hurdles you and I 
Making me laugh, making me cry
But taking that journey together was quite priceless!

You’re now a strong, valiant, young man
Willingly putting your life on the line
Many have thanked you for your service
And, my brave warrior, I am so proud of you 
When I hear your humble, heartfelt reply, “Glad to do it!” 

You’re just simply the best!
While you took a minute to leave the nest
I’m grateful for the extra time we were given
But I know
It’s time to let you go – 
Go take your rightful place in the world.

You’ve grown wings like a fierce eagle 
It’s your time to fly high! Now soar!
But remember that you are always a part of me
And even though we may no longer hold hands
We are still holding hearts.

These tear-splattered pages
Reflect my anguished heart
Knowing you’re prepared to make the ultimate sacrifice for your country
I pray that you will return to me safe and sound
I love you, my hero - my precious son.
Godspeed! 
¡Vaya con Dios! 

05-16-2014

Contest:     Relationships
Sponsor:    Regina Riddle
Placement: 1st

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S.Jagathsimhan Nair October 25, 2014 at 8:56 PM I feel like I have written this, Pandita. Only, I could not have done it this well. My son is a commissioned officer in the Indian Navy and is now on a visit to some African countries which makes me particularly worried for obvious reasons. Pandita Sietesantos October 25, 2014 at 11:29 PM I am so happy that you can identify with the sentiments expressed in this piece about my son. My friend, I truly understand how you feel about your son and I know that you are very proud of him and love him! We have to continue praying for our children's safe return home. Warmest regards always. Pandita

Kika Ayala August 30, 2014 at 9:59 AM Hi Pandita, I revisited this one because I pray for your son's safety everyday! God bless, Kika Pandita Sietesantos August 30, 2014 at 1:51 PM Hi Kika, I am so grateful for all your prayers. Thank you so very much! God bless. Pandita

Poet Destroyer A July 29, 2014 at 4:58 PM Pandita, anytime, It was a very nice tribute.. PD

Poet Destroyer A July 29, 2014 at 1:12 PM Pandita, Congratulations, on your awesome win.... Love Linda Pandita Sietesantos July 29, 2014 at 3:28 PM Many thanks, my dear friend, Linda for your wonderful compliments! Pandita

Robert Lindley July 28, 2014 at 7:18 PM A great write, a great win, Congrats!!! Pandita Sietesantos July 28, 2014 at 9:01 PM Thank you, Robert, my friend for the support! It means a lot to me! Kindest regards!

Casarah Nance July 28, 2014 at 6:58 PM Oh my goodness, this made me cry. HUGS!! grats on your win, wow I am impressed, you touched my heart deeply! Pandita Sietesantos July 28, 2014 at 9:00 PM Casarah, my friend, thank you for your most gracious compliments and thank you for your support and encouragement! With much appreciation and warmest regards.

Shonima Burman July 28, 2014 at 12:32 PM Congrats on your top win Pandita. Warmest Regards. Shonima Pandita Sietesantos July 28, 2014 at 1:54 PM Thank you, dear Shonima, my friend for the support! It means a lot to me! Kindest regards!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 28, 2014 at 9:30 AM Beautiful write Pandita! Hats off to your brave son ,, congrats on big win! Pandita Sietesantos July 28, 2014 at 12:31 PM My dear Dr. Upma, I thank you so much for your heartwarming show of support and continued encouragement. Kindest regards to you, my friend.

Mohan Chutani July 28, 2014 at 7:42 AM passionate write on brave son and top win, congrats Pandita Pandita Sietesantos July 28, 2014 at 7:54 AM Many thanks, my dear friend, Mohan for your wonderful compliments! Pandita

Kika Ayala July 28, 2014 at 7:11 AM Congratulations on your top win, Pandita Pandita Sietesantos July 28, 2014 at 7:53 AM Thank you, dear Kika for your kind congratulations! Warmest regards.

Dr.Ram Mehta July 28, 2014 at 4:35 AM What heartfelt tribute, Pandita. congrats on the win Pandita Sietesantos July 28, 2014 at 6:47 AM Dr. Ram, many thanks for your kind compliments which I always appreciate! Warmest regards. Pandita

Vera Duggan June 9, 2014 at 11:29 PM Pandita what a wonderful tribute to your son, you sound so very proud of him and so you should be, I have two sons and honestly I don't know how I would feel if they were in the services, it was bad enough when Peter was in the army and in Vietnam, you have done such a wonderful job of this poem, keep them coming. Take care.......Vera............... Pandita Sietesantos June 10, 2014 at 7:01 AM My dear Vera, I thank you from the bottom of my heart for this heartwarming show of support and continued encouragement. Kindest regards and warmest wishes.

James Horn June 7, 2014 at 2:27 PM Pandita, "We are still holding hearts." This is just the start of an ongoing bunch of terrific poems. Life goes on and God is in every second of it along with your each poem. Con amor de me' Don Diego Cuerno de Vaca James Thomas Horn My son was 11B2P stationed at Ft. Lewis and Korea. I am retired Army National Guard. What is Jayson's MOS and current station? Pandita Sietesantos June 7, 2014 at 4:15 PM Hi James, thank you so much for your kind feedback and support. My son Jayson is in the Army and was stationed at Fort Hood and now he is in Egypt. May God bless you and your son. Thank you both for your service and dedication to our country! Best wishes always!

Robert Lindley May 23, 2014 at 7:58 AM A truly loving tribute. I felt much the same when my 19 year old daughter left our home to live her life. Now living 4 hours away I miss seeing her everyday! A most excellent heartfelt write! Beautiful ... I am honored to be the first to comment.. Pandita Sietesantos May 23, 2014 at 9:03 AM Robert, thank you so very much for your comments and for your kind understanding! My older son is now in Egypt; and my younger son (same age as your daughter) is also preparing me for his departure:).