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A Tribute To a Major Appliance

R emember how
                                        E ffortlessly  your 
                                        F ather  would
                                        R emove his
                                        I cy cold beer before
                                        G ame Time?
                                        E ach can was
                                        R ippling with an
                                        A phrodesiac of
                                        T he fermented grain.
                                        O h, how I still
                                        R emember those
                                        S ips he let me have...

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Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 10/13/2015 1:06:00 AM Congrats on ur awesome winning write Dan! Login to Reply Dan Cwiak Date: 10/13/2015 6:42:00 AM Thank you, Upma. There have been many times that I was stumped on a theme, but this one just seem to work when I remember those sips of beer. I appreciate your stopping to give me your comments.

Skat A Date: 10/10/2015 12:07:00 PM Dan, Congrats on your wonderful win. **SKAT** Login to Reply Dan Cwiak Date: 10/13/2015 6:39:00 AM Thanks, Skat. I appreciate your read and your words.

Eve Roper Date: 10/9/2015 5:34:00 PM Dan, I love your way of thinking congratulations on your win!!! Enjoyed reading Login to Reply Dan Cwiak Date: 10/13/2015 6:35:00 AM Thanks, Eve. It just came to me when I thought of the beer my dad used to keep in there.

Sandra Haight Date: 10/9/2015 2:59:00 PM Very clever take on the theme, Dan! I really enjoyed your very smooth Acrostic that reads like a mini-story! I remember those days too! Congrats on your win! Login to Reply Dan Cwiak Date: 10/13/2015 6:33:00 AM Thank you, Sandra...I didn't realize my father was giving you sips of his beer too! lol I appreciate the read and your words.

Barbara Gorelick Date: 10/9/2015 1:01:00 PM Now, this is original.What a nice memory..nothing wrong with a sip, in my humble opinion. congrats..you have talent. BG Login to Reply Dan Cwiak Date: 10/13/2015 6:31:00 AM Thanks, Barbara. I appreciate you stopping by to read this and for your comments.

Carrie Richards Date: 10/9/2015 10:03:00 AM So clever are you!! I love your twist !! And a big congratulations well deserved, Dan !! Login to Reply Dan Cwiak Date: 10/9/2015 11:04:00 AM Thanks, Carrie. I had to have that memory come out, and this was the perfect forum.

CayCay Jennings Date: 10/9/2015 9:06:00 AM Congratulations! CayCay Login to Reply Dan Cwiak Date: 10/9/2015 11:01:00 AM Thanks, CayCay. I'm still searching for that #1 spot, but at least I have found some of my voice.

Jan Allison Date: 10/9/2015 4:56:00 AM love the clever acrostic form you used Dan - many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Dan Cwiak Date: 10/9/2015 10:59:00 AM Thanks, Jan. I do remember the sips he gave me...or I would sneak.

Julia Ward Date: 9/30/2015 12:41:00 PM That's good, Dan. GL for the contest. Login to Reply Dan Cwiak Date: 9/30/2015 2:29:00 PM Thanks, Julia.

CayCay Jennings Date: 9/16/2015 7:13:00 PM You are a very clever writer ... CayCay Login to Reply Dan Cwiak Date: 9/30/2015 2:31:00 PM I should have sent you a this thank you before, but better late than never...lol.

John Lawless Date: 9/14/2015 8:46:00 AM A very interesting take on the theme and the simplicity of memories triggers.. Login to Reply Dan Cwiak Date: 10/9/2015 10:34:00 AM Thanks John. It seems that memories are all I have left...lol.