Dan Cwiak Poet Acrostic

A Tribute To a Major Appliance

R emember how
                                        E ffortlessly  your 
                                        F ather  would
                                        R emove his
                                        I cy cold beer before
                                        G ame Time?
                                        E ach can was
                                        R ippling with an
                                        A phrodesiac of
                                        T he fermented grain.
                                        O h, how I still
                                        R emember those
                                        S ips he let me have...

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Dr. Upma A. Sharma October 13, 2015 at 1:06 AM Congrats on ur awesome winning write Dan! Dan Cwiak October 13, 2015 at 6:42 AM Thank you, Upma. There have been many times that I was stumped on a theme, but this one just seem to work when I remember those sips of beer. I appreciate your stopping to give me your comments.

Skat A October 10, 2015 at 12:07 PM Dan, Congrats on your wonderful win. **SKAT** Dan Cwiak October 13, 2015 at 6:39 AM Thanks, Skat. I appreciate your read and your words.

Eve Roper October 9, 2015 at 5:34 PM Dan, I love your way of thinking congratulations on your win!!! Enjoyed reading Dan Cwiak October 13, 2015 at 6:35 AM Thanks, Eve. It just came to me when I thought of the beer my dad used to keep in there.

Sandra Haight October 9, 2015 at 2:59 PM Very clever take on the theme, Dan! I really enjoyed your very smooth Acrostic that reads like a mini-story! I remember those days too! Congrats on your win! Dan Cwiak October 13, 2015 at 6:33 AM Thank you, Sandra...I didn't realize my father was giving you sips of his beer too! lol I appreciate the read and your words.

Barbara Gorelick October 9, 2015 at 1:01 PM Now, this is original.What a nice memory..nothing wrong with a sip, in my humble opinion. congrats..you have talent. BG Dan Cwiak October 13, 2015 at 6:31 AM Thanks, Barbara. I appreciate you stopping by to read this and for your comments.

Carrie Richards October 9, 2015 at 10:03 AM So clever are you!! I love your twist !! And a big congratulations well deserved, Dan !! Dan Cwiak October 9, 2015 at 11:04 AM Thanks, Carrie. I had to have that memory come out, and this was the perfect forum.

CayCay Godwin October 9, 2015 at 9:06 AM Congratulations! CayCay Dan Cwiak October 9, 2015 at 11:01 AM Thanks, CayCay. I'm still searching for that #1 spot, but at least I have found some of my voice.

Jan Allison October 9, 2015 at 4:56 AM love the clever acrostic form you used Dan - many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx Dan Cwiak October 9, 2015 at 10:59 AM Thanks, Jan. I do remember the sips he gave me...or I would sneak.

Julia Ward September 30, 2015 at 12:41 PM That's good, Dan. GL for the contest. Dan Cwiak September 30, 2015 at 2:29 PM Thanks, Julia.

CayCay Godwin September 16, 2015 at 7:13 PM You are a very clever writer ... CayCay Dan Cwiak September 30, 2015 at 2:31 PM I should have sent you a this thank you before, but better late than never...lol.

John Lawless September 14, 2015 at 8:46 AM A very interesting take on the theme and the simplicity of memories triggers.. Dan Cwiak October 9, 2015 at 10:34 AM Thanks John. It seems that memories are all I have left...lol.