A Triad of Tanka IX

Fragrant rose petals

Streaked in trickling rivulets               

Of shy, tearful zest;

But more poignant your red lips

Moistened by the cooling air.
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Curtains partly drawn

I waited till the frost came;

Still you had not come.

The guiding candle I lit

Left in my lonely window.
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Hunters silver Moon,

Touching down on the hills brow,

Deserts the Heavens.

His callous indifference

Could almost equal your own.
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Date: 9/6/2025 6:34:00 AM
how beautifully entwined! This form seems to be your forte.
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Date: 9/5/2025 12:37:00 PM
All the elements of pain, parting, love woven beautifully!!
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