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A Triad of Haiku V

A leaf detaches From some resplendent, green twig. All Summer shudders! ------------------------------------- The wind calling out, Like a high, mewing buzzard, Behind nearby hills. ------------------------------------- Winter came around... Slipping in beneath the door As I lit the fire. -------------------------------------

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/14/2025 12:45:00 AM

- Beautiful nature pictures, John :) - hugs

Valsa George

Date: 8/13/2025 9:12:00 PM

'The wind calling out like a buzzard.... 'Love the comparison. When Eagles soar overhead, as a child, I have observed mother hen calling out to the chicks to alert them on danger. A beautiful set of haikus.

Ryan Geoffrey Hayward

Date: 8/13/2025 6:00:00 PM

Wow! I know how hard it is to justice to a haiku, they are very beautifully written and with fantastic imagery too which can be rare.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/13/2025 11:32:00 AM

So very cool! Shivering at the thought of the wind being compared to a buzzard. Sounds like the beginning of a murder mystery! Love the 3rd one!

John Fleming
Date: 8/13/2025 1:54:00 PM

Thanks, Kim. You are most kind! :) john

Sotto Poet

Date: 8/13/2025 5:50:00 AM

Stunning metaphors all around these haikus, conveying a wonderful seasonal scene

John Fleming
Date: 8/13/2025 6:05:00 AM

Thank you, S.P. You are very kind...I am most encouraged by your generous remarks. Always appreciated! :) john

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 8/13/2025 3:08:00 AM

Great haikus. I wrote a few but never managed to get the punch of a haiku.

John Fleming
Date: 8/13/2025 6:01:00 AM

Thanks for taking the time to both visit and comment, Victor. I always enjoy reading your remarks - and very much appreciated! :) john p.s have a go at a Tanka, Victor...gives one more scope for bringing it all together.

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 8/12/2025 4:58:00 PM

lovely imagery...I liked 'slipping beneath the door.' Perfect!

John Fleming
Date: 8/13/2025 5:48:00 AM

Thanks, Sara. Glad you enjoyed - much appreciated! :) john

Paige Hind

Date: 8/12/2025 12:56:00 PM

Very pretty images, "All Summer shudders" :)

John Fleming
Date: 8/12/2025 1:03:00 PM

Thank you, Paige. I really appreciate your kind comments. :) john