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A Tree That Blocks the Sunlight

This tree that blocks the sunlight must be
 felled. It's a toweringly tall tree with boughs 
that conceal a generous amount of sun rays 
and hides the open blue skies. Therefore...

It needs to be felled!

It turns a bright sunny day rather dim...
It's a nuisance! I don't mind birds seeking 
a fleeting refuge, or nesting birds that sing 
for me early in the morning, but I insist...

It needs to be felled!

It's a perpetual home to irritating squirrels 
I can't keep out of my garden. Acorns noisily fall 
on the tin roof! I'd handsomely pay anyone
who will topple this eyesore for me.

It needs to be felled!

It overwhelms me with dead leaves in the fall
Who knows many shooting stars I've missed? 
Should I always come out to marvel at the sky? 
At nature's breathtaking majesty?

It needs to be felled!

I miss seeing flock of birds in flight. I need
generous sunshine when I draw the curtains 
at dawn. This tree that blocks the sunlight
tries my patience each day.

It needs to be felled!


STRAND CHOICE O,any form,any theme Poetry Contest (Winner: 2nd Place)
Sponsored by: Brian Strand 
03/22/2020

*a rant poem written in real time*
Date written and posted: 04/24/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Chiri Avatar
March 24, 2020 at 5:19 PM
And congrats to you too my friend! Well deserved win!;)
Ibeh Avatar
March 24, 2020 at 6:25 PM
Thank you, Brenda:-)
Pandit Avatar
March 24, 2020 at 4:14 PM
Congrats on your podium win, Edward--enjoyed the read.
Ibeh Avatar
March 24, 2020 at 6:24 PM
Thank you, Vijay:-)
Kauffman Avatar
March 24, 2020 at 2:24 PM
Edward, congratulations on your win in Brian's contest. I like your formatting and narrative story. So well crafted!
Ibeh Avatar
March 24, 2020 at 6:24 PM
Thank you, Sam:-)
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