A Tree In Winter

The tree stood stark and lonely,
All naked in the cold.
Her branches bare, her lovely leaves,
The breath of Winter stole.

In spite of all she stood yet proud,
Her branches raised to Heaven,
A silent prayer in her heart,
For Winter's sleep to lessen,

The pain she felt amid the cold,
The biting wind so cruel,
And please let not some human come,
And use her wood for fuel.

Then the winter queen looked down,
On Tree with sympathy,
And gave to her a lovely gown,
Of snow in symmetry.

Now the tree stands all adorned,
In glowing winter grandeur,
And all who see her stand in awe,
Of Tree in Winter's splendor.




Thanks to Phyllis Babcock for her poem "TREE" which inspired this one.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Lantz Avatar
March 16, 2012 at 1:45 PM
i love trees. this speaks from the tree and the description
Ball Avatar
March 17, 2012 at 1:31 PM
Thanks so much Stacey. Glad you liked it. God Bless, Love Mom
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February 24, 2012 at 7:27 AM
beautiful poem, Judy, one can feel each and every word. love this. harry
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February 24, 2012 at 1:52 PM
Thanks so much Harry. Glad you liked it. God Bless, JB
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February 23, 2012 at 8:31 AM
Wonderful poem Judy and glad I inspired you on this one. I like the phrase winter queen. I always seem to refer to winter as a he. ha ha. I hate to see the leaves fall in autumn. love phyl
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February 24, 2012 at 2:16 PM
Thanks so much Phyl. Glad you liked it. God Bless, JB
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February 22, 2012 at 10:49 PM
wow, she gave you some marvelous inspiration. LOVE it.
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February 24, 2012 at 2:29 PM
Thanks so much Andrea. Glad you like it. God Bless, JB
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February 22, 2012 at 7:45 PM
A spectacular poem, Judy. This is a reminder there is beauty in every season. Thank you for reading my poetry today. Blessings, Rhonda
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February 24, 2012 at 2:41 PM
Thanks so much Rhonda. Glad you like it. God Bless, JB
Brown Avatar
February 22, 2012 at 7:26 AM
I am stopping by to thank you so much for your kind comments on my poetry. I enjoyed reading yours today. Have a wonderful day and please continue sharing your poetry Judy. Love, Carol
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February 22, 2012 at 9:39 AM
Thanks so much Carol. Glad you liked it. God Bless, JB
Onclaud Avatar
February 22, 2012 at 5:29 AM
a poetic treat that depicts the stages of a tree's grandeur... well done, judy... lyrical piece!..") huggs!
Ball Avatar
February 22, 2012 at 6:32 AM
Thanks so much Nette. Glad you enjoyed it. God Bless, JB
Campi Avatar
February 22, 2012 at 5:12 AM
This is a beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing your words with us. Despite the cold, winter can be beautiful; yet i prefer the spring and the summer. Take care, Jancarl
Ball Avatar
February 22, 2012 at 6:37 AM
Thanks so much Jancarl. Glad you like it. God Bless, JB
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February 22, 2012 at 2:48 AM
The tree is sleeping in the winter,beautisleep. Wery good poem Judy.... I waithing for the springtime.... - oxox Anne-Lise
Ball Avatar
February 22, 2012 at 3:41 AM
Thanks so much Anne Lise for being first to comment on this poem. Glad you like it. God Bless, JB
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