A Traveler's Prayer

Travelers tempt the hand of fate, of time
moving from within one box to the other side.
Sometimes we’re scared, we cry sometime 
yet, to take that step, that risk “Ah, let the heart abide.”

Moving from within one box to the other side
we get a new perspective, a learning most sublime. 
Yet, to take that step, that risk “Ah, let the heart abide,”
different shapes, all askew, beneath a mask of pantomime. 

We get a new perspective, a learning most sublime,
a hard fought for understanding, from which we can’t backslide.
Different shapes, all askew, beneath a mask of pantomime,
all are born, and grow and die, as to eternity we glide.

A hard fought for understanding, from which we can’t backslide,
a call for peace and unity within this woman’s lifetime.
All are born, and grow and die, as to eternity we glide,
as on we wander, one and all, hand in hand through time.

A call for peace and unity within this woman’s lifetime
sometimes we’re scared, we cry sometime, 
as on we wander, one and all, hand in hand through time
travelers tempt the hand of fate, in searching different climes…

Topic:Backsliding
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Mehta Avatar
December 14, 2010 at 12:40 AM
Many congrats Deborah on winning coveted spot in Paulas Pantoum contest with this beautiful write. Luv/best wishes........Hitendra Mehta
Brown Avatar
December 13, 2010 at 11:31 AM
Congratulations on your win Deborah in Paula's Pantoum contest. Love, Carol
Radke Avatar
December 13, 2010 at 9:52 AM
Congratulations on this winning poem. It has so much truth in it. I love the phrase 'beneath a mask of pantomime' as well as the entire theme of your poem. Very good.
Mannan Avatar
December 12, 2010 at 8:48 PM
What a unique and superb poem Deborah. Many congratulations for this win.
Haick Avatar
December 12, 2010 at 12:49 PM
Congratulations on your beautiful Pantoum, Deb! Goes to my favs List! Enjoy your afternoon! Love, Audrey
Kendrick Avatar
December 12, 2010 at 11:51 AM
Congratulations on your win in the contest..Sara
Devonshire Avatar
December 12, 2010 at 8:36 AM
Congratulations on your win, Deb! Love, Carolyn
Sweetheart Avatar
December 12, 2010 at 7:26 AM
Congrats Debbie on your winning poem in Paula's Pantoum contest with this vibrant write and win .. enjoy another top ten victory TEACH with luv..
Mehta Avatar
December 12, 2010 at 5:53 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of paula, Deb
Scripca Avatar
December 11, 2010 at 7:08 AM
What is more precious than "a call for peace and unity" in this present world full of paradox? What a once-in -a lifetime trip to Egypt must've been for you, dear Deb! Good luck in the contest. Love, iolanda
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December 11, 2010 at 7:07 AM
What is more precious than "a call for peace and unity" in this present world full of paradox? What a once-in -a lifetime trip to Egypt must've been for you, dear Deb! Good luck in the contest. Love, iolanda
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December 11, 2010 at 5:49 AM
Commented earlier, Deb, but there was a line in Jules Pfeiffer's play "Little Murders." Very simple: "We're born, we grow old, we die." The lead character Patsy has gone from being a perpetual optimist to a depressed pessimist. Shortly after she says the line, she's shot and killed by sniper fire through the window of her apartment. Your poem's similar line recalled her despair.
Dietrich Avatar
December 10, 2010 at 6:43 PM
Just lIke a wanderer's prayer, Deb. ARen't pantoums awesome? they just keep the words flowing! LIke in this one. LUv, Andrea
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December 10, 2010 at 4:44 PM
Wonderful prayer Debbie .. good entry for the Pantoum contest if u do enter it ..good luck... a great insight into the world of travel ... SOUP MAIL...
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December 10, 2010 at 10:49 AM
Traveling gives us so much insight into other cultures. How wonderful you are calling for peace and unity now that you're home from Egypt, Deb. Wish everyone would heed this call! Love, Carolyn
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