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A Traveler Traveled Then He Stopped

A traveler traveled...then he stopped… No more could he change… Tried to move forward… but could not… Because his mind remained the same…

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Shirley Rebstock

Date: 10/10/2018 9:31:00 PM

Lots of wisdom in this quautrain. Thought provoking.

Sanford Weir
Date: 10/14/2018 5:40:00 AM

Shirley, I appreciate your kind words. When it comes to changes in life I tried to keep in mind that sometimes long-held thoughts and beliefs may no longer serve you the way they once did. Sanford

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/10/2018 1:00:00 AM

I really like the tension between the desire to move forward and the fact that his mind was stuck, wouldn't let him. Well-expressed. ~ Gershon

Sanford Weir
Date: 10/11/2018 5:04:00 AM

Thank you Gershon, The quatrain came to me after a conversation with someone who most people would consider to be a rather successful person but who felt "stuck" at a particular point in her life. Sanford