Eve Roper Poet Quintain (Sicilian)

A Tragedy

A tragedy, a train derailed. 
Not far in deep grief of the scene; 
homeward-bound it so tried, but failed.
Burnt cork smell and images seen 
veiled as they lay upon cold ground.



11/30/2019

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Ann Foster December 3, 2019 at 9:23 PM Very powerful... wow. Ann

Paul Callus December 3, 2019 at 1:12 PM Well done, Eve. You have ably and meaningfully inserted all prompt words in the content of this poem. In my eyes, a winner. Hugs // paul

Mystic Rose Rose December 1, 2019 at 6:28 AM this is well done, We never know when we begin our journey where we will end up, Love you sis, gl in the contest xo

Demetrios Trifiatis December 1, 2019 at 4:15 AM Never a tragedy was told in such a fine verse dearest Eve! Hugs xxx

Jenish Somadas December 1, 2019 at 2:21 AM Very good entry for the contest.. Best wishes..

Na Na November 30, 2019 at 9:21 PM Hi Eve nicely painted. Thanks for sharing this. Best of luck in the contest

Sandra Adams November 30, 2019 at 9:02 PM powerful imagery...good use of the five words, best wishes in the contest... :) hugs