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A Tragedy

A tragedy, a train derailed. Not far in deep grief of the scene; homeward-bound it so tried, but failed. Burnt cork smell and images seen veiled as they lay upon cold ground. 11/30/2019

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Date: 12/3/2019 9:23:00 PM
Very powerful... wow. Ann
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Date: 12/3/2019 1:12:00 PM
Well done, Eve. You have ably and meaningfully inserted all prompt words in the content of this poem. In my eyes, a winner. Hugs // paul
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Date: 12/1/2019 6:28:00 AM
this is well done, We never know when we begin our journey where we will end up, Love you sis, gl in the contest xo
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Date: 12/1/2019 4:15:00 AM
Never a tragedy was told in such a fine verse dearest Eve! Hugs xxx
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Date: 12/1/2019 2:21:00 AM
Very good entry for the contest.. Best wishes..
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Date: 11/30/2019 9:21:00 PM
Hi Eve nicely painted. Thanks for sharing this. Best of luck in the contest
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Date: 11/30/2019 9:02:00 PM
powerful imagery...good use of the five words, best wishes in the contest... :) hugs
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