A TRADITIONAL TANKA HIKU
November the Fifth )
layered in a liquid fog ) SHOW
firework party starts- )
sweet chestnuts roasting slowly )TELL
potatoes baking harden )
memories of Fall
bonfired in smoky embers-
re-light once again
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