A Traditional Old Man

Five decades ago, one dusk after field duty
I stood at Moirang Lamkhai by the roadside
waiting for the passenger bus.
No bus came the last one might had gone I feared.

Then I spied an old man, dhoty hitched to knees,
shirt of cotton coarse sleeves long.
Bare foot he strode in the hush of the twilight.
I hailed, " Uncle has the last bus gone ? "
" Yes, it has gone, no more tonight."  he replied,
" Homeward bound ? Don't worry stay at my house tonight."

No hotel in the bazaar but a pure hospitality.

We walked the road, his voice was gentle.
" See how the land developed - going on the road 
feels like going on my home's floor (earthen)."
Then Gopaljee Sharma,Asstt Registrar C.S. 
rolled in by office jeep post duty.
He called me aboard : I thanked the kind elder, 
bade farewell, returned to my residence.

Now Moirang Bazar boasts hotels.

But such a kind hospitable old man,
which was the characteristics of people in the old days, 
is not seen again.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Gifford Avatar
April 19, 2026 at 3:59 AM
Hello Akham, bring back the old days where kindness and compassion were normal. Beautifully written.
Singh Avatar
May 4, 2026 at 9:37 PM
Thank you
Greenhough Avatar
April 14, 2026 at 9:47 PM
A lot of truth in what you wrote. Times and people have changed. I dont like it either.
Singh Avatar
May 4, 2026 at 9:37 PM
Thank you
Buhagiar Avatar
April 5, 2026 at 10:51 AM
So true, these days, kindness is a luxury.
Singh Avatar
May 4, 2026 at 9:38 PM
Thank you
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