A Town Called Suicide Pt. 1

welcome to a town called Suicide
where broken dreams
come to die
where men shed a tear
but they never cry
where hope is seen
but it's all a lie
this town shall be the end of the road
for you and I

welcome to a town called Suicide
this town is filled
with shadowed halls
broken steeples
and bloody falls
darkened corners
end every road
while demons' shadows
grace every abode
from the sky
falls a blackened rain
while more people come
to end their pain

welcome to a town called Suicide
where broken people
come to die
where everyone sheds a tear
but they never cry
where life is seen
but it's all a lie
this town is the end of the road
for both you and I
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Matheny Avatar
November 29, 2008 at 8:21 PM
I LOVE THIS POEM!!!!!!!! I love anything that deals with , or depression. . . Considering I have/done all. . . Wanna be friends? ^.^ Love Alexz P.S. Read some of my poetry and tell me your honest oppion.
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