A Tough Question

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A Tough Question

An explorer's life can be tough when it is time to use a rough bridge to cross a ravine and flee an indigene. Is the thirteenth board strong enough?

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Christina Bowring

Date: 9/29/2023 12:33:00 PM

A great, well written limerick. If you’re a bit superstitious, might be best to avoid the 13th! Enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing :)

A. Ormulyce
Date: 9/30/2023 8:13:00 AM

Thank you so much. Glad you enjoyed reading it. A wise and wonderful comment!

David Fisher

Date: 9/23/2023 7:36:00 AM

Good limerick! Could we skip to the 14th board?

A. Ormulyce
Date: 9/23/2023 1:40:00 PM

Thank you so much. Great answer; I love it.

Silent One

Date: 9/23/2023 7:08:00 AM

Hello my friend, this is PG.. I was the one on ALT who encouraged you to join here.. A great limerick.. flows really well.

A. Ormulyce
Date: 9/23/2023 2:01:00 PM

Hello, my friend. Yes, thank you so much for the link and comment. It's a highly interesting website. I had a difficult year. The last step of closing my previous activity had just finished last week. So, now, I can give my time to becoming a writer. It's challenging but funny.